Comments by All Members
- "I feel like i should say something but no words are fitting to describe you're this silently menacing piece that you have written....what can i say? do i even have to tell you that i love it? : ) "
Posted by andhaka on "That broken record" by Deathkitten
- "Seen the thousand yard stare far too many times to be intimidated by it. Hatred is nothing if not a weapon, use it well and you won't have to use it often, use it badly you become the weapon and hate the wielder. Great write DK, there's a certain calmness to this that speaks volumes."
Posted by Unknown on "That broken record" by Deathkitten
- "This is by far the best one you've written. it seems as though you didn't just jot your rage.. you released it with class and talent and took your time to place each line or word where it needed to be to be felt as you felt it. fucking perfectly delivered i'm impressed and turned on . i think i'll keep this one. a totally different yet luring side of you that makes it hard to resist. mmmmmmmm.. finger licking fucking good girl."
Posted by Devilish on "That broken record" by Deathkitten
- "holy fuck this is crazy ass good! you got a very strong message here. I knew when you were pissed you'd part the sea. bravo my sweety on such a spit in the face poem that's really poisonous. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "That broken record" by Deathkitten
- "The lungs breathe though we sleep, yet we can control them unlike our beating heart. Two different nervous systems for different reasons, as selective advantages in our evolution. Always enjoy a few good deep breaths on occasion to relieve tension, OHMMMMmmmmm, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "~Breath-less~" by Deathkitten
- "Awe yes that precious commodity, air...
I struggle on a daily basis for this life sustaining element. nice to see it appreciated by others ~^_^~ Divine write. Kitten xxx"
Posted by blue angel on "~Breath-less~" by Deathkitten
- "Sometimes we take for granted all the "little things" that have direct impact on our life... like breathing, without it we'd seize to exist. Well done, i enjoyed this xoxo"
Posted by xZombie Poptartzx on "~Breath-less~" by Deathkitten
- "as a smoker I understand being breathless, I know its off the topic but theres many things that make me breathless. like your poem has done. your an awesome writer jess, and you never disappoint. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "~Breath-less~" by Deathkitten
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