Comments by All Members
- "I can totally relate given that alot of my works are on the lighter side. Despite all else it's fine here besides this place needs some light from time to time so knowing that I'm not alone in that sense is just as inspiring for me. Thank you so much for sharing and take care."
Posted by Gray Vision on "Tucked Away" by bluehoney19
- "jealousy... it is a monster... not just to the one its focused on but to ourselves as well... great write and keep the lock and key handy."
Posted by Unknown on ""Jaded"" by bluehoney19
- "I must disagree that "you are nothing without it", yet it makes you feel this way and that must be very hard to take. you will have extensions of your being outside the norm. this is a very heartbreaking write and to share such a personal struggle shows your bravery."
Posted by Unknown on "Infertile Imperfection" by bluehoney19
- "some will only see what they can... this is their weakness and it makes them little more than excrement... though I was once told "always see more than you ever let be known"... the same source told me "outer judgment is not yours to speek of"... both have held true and necessary in my life."
Posted by Unknown on "Withered Decay" by bluehoney19
- "i love it. it gives character to something emotional, and even better something so common in this day and time. very well done. "
Posted by Unknown on ""Jaded"" by bluehoney19
- "Very wise to lock it back up thats for certain! Hahaha. I love the concept and the metaphor here, very gripping other than the snap ending. It just leaves me begging for more, which may not be the case for every reader, but always a good thought to toss around the ol' noggin!"
Posted by Poetic-Realm on ""Jaded"" by bluehoney19
- "Oh this is absolutely beautiful.. Wow! A brilliant description of jealousy i am in awe.. lol wow. talk about poster perfect.. hello there you and thank you for your comment i appreciate it."
Posted by Devilish on ""Jaded"" by bluehoney19
- "It was actually about the "green eyed" jealousy monster we all face from time to time. How quickly it surfaces and how quickly we must lock it back up lol. I had a moment of rage this morning :-) I really appreciate your input, thank you"
Posted by bluehoney19 on ""Jaded"" by bluehoney19
- "Man I really wish this could have been a bit longer. Theres so many questions I have regarding this beast! Haha. More imagery would have really tied this together nicely, especially at the end. The last stanza seems slightly rushed, but maybe that was your point. To explain hkw quickly we turn jaded from the beast maybe?"
Posted by Poetic-Realm on ""Jaded"" by bluehoney19
- "a lot of truth up there... we can only take them "one by one", its just so hard to see it that way at times..."
Posted by Unknown on "Darkened Seas" by bluehoney19
- "not "lighter" at all... most of us can relate to this completely. I got a feelin youll make it here just fine... now if you can just make it home."
Posted by Unknown on "Tucked Away" by bluehoney19
- "it looks like you just joined dp, welcome and I must say, if your future works are even half as good as this is, I can't wait for you to write more"
Posted by BrideToAgony on "Darkened Seas" by bluehoney19
- "The prison within. We all have our own demons and walls we build to protect ourselves from them. Some demons are within, some without. Welcome to the valley, dark or light, it's all good here - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Tucked Away" by bluehoney19
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