Tucked Away

By bluehoney19

Stale
Dusty
Ripples of shame


Unspoken
Unseen
Windowless eyes


Tearing at me
Screaming,
Judging.
Hiding inside it
Hiding from it


Moving forward,
Falling back.
Reaching up,
Nothing to grab.


Lifeless
Breathing
Voicelss words


Frigid
Burning
Feeling nothing



Let me go home........

   

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Copyright 2013 bluehoney19
Published on Saturday, January 5, 2013.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

be gentle, most of my stuff is a bit on the "lighter" side ;-)
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  • Gray Vision On Tuesday, April 16, 2013, Gray Vision (424)By person wrote:

    I can totally relate given that alot of my works are on the lighter side. Despite all else it's fine here besides this place needs some light from time to time so knowing that I'm not alone in that sense is just as inspiring for me. Thank you so much for sharing and take care.

  • A former member wrote: not "lighter" at all... most of us can relate to this completely. I got a feelin youll make it here just fine... now if you can just make it home.

  • PoetessDarkly On Saturday, January 5, 2013, PoetessDarkly (693)By person wrote:

    I have a name for depression, chemical suicide. I have used those two words in a couple peoms.

  • Nehema On Saturday, January 5, 2013, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    The prison within. We all have our own demons and walls we build to protect ourselves from them. Some demons are within, some without. Welcome to the valley, dark or light, it's all good here - XXOO Scholar

  • bluehoney19 On Saturday, January 5, 2013, bluehoney19 (12)By person wrote:

    Thank you, that means so much. This is actually the first time I have tried writing darker stuff and I think I found a piece of me that has been dormant

  • Fallenfromgrace On Saturday, January 5, 2013, Fallenfromgrace (103)By person wrote:

    for some reason every time I read this, all I can think about is prison. Does that make sense..? Very good work. I love the way you present your writes. Much talent. :)

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