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- "*smiles* now that, that was a most beautiful allegory and one that i am thankful for reading...truly few can ever create something so awe inspiring and understandable...but you have done it with eloquence...wunderbar!"
Posted by Solace on "Love's Vespine Allegory" by purr_verse
- "oh natty... this just makes me cry. I was very moved by "and in that reflexive, cruel instant".. perhaps not the most melodious line in the piece, but the one which rang truest to me. Terrific title."
Posted by flying_fox on "Love's Vespine Allegory" by purr_verse
- ""sunshards reflecting ephemeral prisms" Splen(purr)id, in the likeness of DH Lawrence. I luv the color/texture which tickles motion like an 'alien delight'. "chitinous wingmarvels" This Scolia soror; such a sadly , yet beautiful moment. Feels like a pain"
Posted by Unknown on "Love's Vespine Allegory" by purr_verse
- "Each one of your writes that I read reminds me of an excerpt from a glorious adventure tale. Hmm maybe it's just me, either way I love _every_ minute of each. Wonderful work:) ~Ryan"
Posted by Unknown on "Love's Vespine Allegory" by purr_verse
- "utterly perfect, in every way, written as only you could, another of your poems that i find ill be able to know off by heart, so many things shine through this"
Posted by Anth on "Love's Vespine Allegory" by purr_verse
- "awww, that's so beautiful, and sad..... the most amazing imagery, the opening stanza is delicious, moorish, but oh, then it hurts - I felt like a child instinctively acting and then the remorse..... oh you paint a brilliant masterpiece. Thank you."
Posted by Lotophagi on "Love's Vespine Allegory" by purr_verse
- "so sad ... the temp pain of a stinger seems preferable to the lasting pain mistakes like this bring ... just a beautiful piece , a simplest tragedy... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "Love's Vespine Allegory" by purr_verse
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