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- ""I cannot escape my two cages" and that Poe-like tinntinabulation beat of "deleted, deleted deleted / again and again -and again" but this prose_verse is all you. And only you can speak with your own creations: "Leviathan..." as your sense, your pen,.."
Posted by Unknown on "Meaning Less" by purr_verse
- "...your ink, your emotions, your inner mirror cage (?). Meaningless? How less in such and more by the moment; a gifted poem from a gifted writer. Leviathan in you should come out more."
Posted by Unknown on "Meaning Less" by purr_verse
- ""Leviathan, speak to me". Yes, sir, you have captured exactly what is meant inside this "two cages" piece... "in anyeverything." The numbers, of course, are the myth, the eldritch enigma... a superbly poetic work which means more than less, for certain..."
Posted by Unknown on "Meaning Less" by purr_verse
- "~"Leviathan, speak to me"...that line's just awesome...meaning less and meaningless, a reflection of the persona's self...I can sense the feeling of being consumed..."
Posted by Rebel_not_Radical on "Meaning Less" by purr_verse
- ""everywhere as the faded graffiti
that quietly chokes an aging, bent factory"...god, i read this super fast. it's as if i had to, in order to keep up with the beauty of your words. you took me for a ride with this one."
Posted by dying angel on "InAnimate" by purr_verse
- "...and roar of the F1s 'cross "the skyscraper streets"; inAnimate, alive, aware. "velocity's strength.""
Posted by Unknown on "InAnimate" by purr_verse
- "Your writing is always a kind of adjective from the complex vocabulry of what is your pace/place/prose; it changes like refrActed light, the density of the sounds you create; your arena. I can feel those "forgotten bricks" breathing in the crescendo..."
Posted by Unknown on "InAnimate" by purr_verse
- ""omnipresent as it screams
from officeblock wall
to wail to wall to wail to wall;" Love this gasolene fueled pocket of engine-pulse; "and the ferocious octane banshee!" Someone should buy you a Ferrari! This fast-paced poem scrawls w/ sound. Nice!"
Posted by Unknown on "InAnimate" by purr_verse
- "gah so quick it effected some of my spelling!! Good job my trousies are elesticated...or else oopsies for the pink boxers...hehehe...ok *serious face* ahem - great post!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "InAnimate" by purr_verse
- "you make language a delight here!! The velocity and breakneck speed of the swirling consanance and assonance, the fusuon of sounds...RAWR indeed, what a blast...octane poetry, a seldom post from you, but one worth nourishing"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "InAnimate" by purr_verse
- "'...the ferocious octane banshee..' -what an interesting and amusing metaphor -loved it!"
Posted by Unknown on "InAnimate" by purr_verse
- "It kinda reminds me of that feeling you get from something or someone that just comes along at the right time, in that right way, unlocking buried strength and will. It worked. Lady. She keeps rocking!! rawr. ~b"
Posted by blue on "InAnimate" by purr_verse
- "What the.. hell? haha! This was so fantastic; you've completely caught me off guard with this one. "echoes from incorrect corners" ... "from officeblock wall
to wail to wall to wail to wall" =)=)=) "
Posted by blue on "InAnimate" by purr_verse
- "Suck beautifully striking imagery - a vivid lesson in true emotive responses. A damn good read and I'm going to read it again. Good work."
Posted by Guillotine on "Lupercal" by purr_verse
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