Comments by All Members
- "The town erupts - multiplicity - but singularity, for you become part of it - you are it...one bleeds into the other and the differences disappear...awakening the gods, mapping the dragons within and without"
Posted by Solace on "Triptych II: This Muted God" by purr_verse
- "Symbolic explosions - the secret city - reminiscent of only itself. Not pastism, nor nostalgia - but moreso quiet reverence for what was and is, observification from the discerning eye but more so than that: involved observance"
Posted by Solace on "Triptych II: This Muted God" by purr_verse
- "Lost in the illuminescent (magniglorious extension) magnus opium.opus! Drowning in words like incandescent rain on a city become luminous and fantastical - more voyeur than tourist, more artist than voyeur..."
Posted by Solace on "Triptych I: deConstruction Time Again" by purr_verse
- "The imprints are felt in the deconstruction duet - double entendres like falling rain - a rhythm to set in dance - ballet back and forth through era's and exposed in this endless everyages place..."
Posted by Solace on "Triptych I: deConstruction Time Again" by purr_verse
- "It has taken until now until I feel fit to actually ingest this triptych - and yet I am still dumbfounded by the gargantuan epic that I behold - as if indeed I were 'imposed upon in steel' metropolis rising morphing into abominations"
Posted by Solace on "Triptych I: deConstruction Time Again" by purr_verse
- "...well, other than the scheme I stole from Poe; but yeah, that's a whole new ball game...anyways, thanks for the read, and I see why you won; seeing such a similar writing style gives me a bit of hope... :D -- Darun"
Posted by SilentStalker on "The Ballad of Flattery's Doom" by purr_verse
- "...I'm actually glad to see someone else masters 'ABCB' on here as well; sure, 'ABAB' done right is much more impressive, but how many times do we see it done well...? this is definitely my preferred scheme, in writing And in reading..."
Posted by SilentStalker on "The Ballad of Flattery's Doom" by purr_verse
- "...though being a perfectionist in my own heart, I might spot some things others may have brushed off; that, however, doesn't take away the fact that this is as close to perfect as a write can ever get..."
Posted by SilentStalker on "The Ballad of Flattery's Doom" by purr_verse
- "...this makes me proud to have been commented on by you; you're a master of metre and rhyme as well, and frankly, I can't decide which part of the poem drew me in more--the flawless structure, or the onbroken content and message..."
Posted by SilentStalker on "The Ballad of Flattery's Doom" by purr_verse
- "Yes, I do listen to Skyclad. Most of my inspirations come from gothic music such as Theatre of Tragedy and Tristania. I didn't know how else to reply (damn newbie !)"
Posted by Unknown on "Self: Sufficient" by purr_verse
- "Reminds me of the Dio song called Push.. The music video stared Tenacious D.. So did this write.. Kinda *Scratches neck* I like it lots"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "Pocketlife" by purr_verse
- "Wow, this is so... eesh, one of those times where you're like, "Why didn't I think of that?" Gorgeous. "
Posted by Lolita on "Bent" by purr_verse
- "Now that was the true definition of a poem! Powerful and epic with such little said! Yet every word brought further strength! Excellent Write! \Billy/"
Posted by Spiral Downward on "Flaccid" by purr_verse
- "iambic tetrameter seems to rollick the see saw rhyme into this wistfully tinged ballad, nice to see a metrically appeasing piece, a real versatile showing from you, a poem of intellect and emotive stress....line stress stresses the strength/huh?!?!? Yes!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The Ballad of Flattery's Doom" by purr_verse
- "what art doesn't yearn through pain; reflect...situate; this reminds me of a poem by Liz Lochhead called...errr...."Carnival Horses"? That vivid feel of innocence and of the fairground. This is emotionally surging and delicate somehow.....words without ex"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Self: Sufficient" by purr_verse
- "Some of the best poetry are disjointed scrawls... puzzles, enigmas, layers, Hughes, e. e.; we are all teeth to our pens from the simplest something to the most complex nothing."
Posted by Unknown on "Self: Sufficient" by purr_verse
- ""hold on" Stunning... absolutely vivid, poignant, sad, real... A soul revealed and hope for others ("Grip your jacket") in this 'carousel' lifeRide... what else can anyone do? Simple yet complex="10"."
Posted by Unknown on "Self: Sufficient" by purr_verse
- "This makes me smile because it is SO true. when the chips are down, you can always count on yourself. And me. You can hang on to my jacket any time you want. xxx"
Posted by flying_fox on "Self: Sufficient" by purr_verse
- "this is a little bit of wisdom mixed with a fear of letting go. yet, also, the difficulty of finding something to hold onto. your words always leave me digging into the core of my being. very insightful"
Posted by dying angel on "Self: Sufficient" by purr_verse
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