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"I came back to add this to my favourites. Thank you, again. "
Posted by Unknown on "...She Played Violin Beautifully..." by SluG

"*so much for sharing this. I will come back to it often. Fuck, I had to pause this comment and re-read the damn thing. The whole blaming part - it's absolutely killing me. I so need to shut up.. "
Posted by Unknown on "...She Played Violin Beautifully..." by SluG

"Holy shit. This tore me up and knocked me on my ass. For such a short write, it packed so much pain and power.. my heart is aching and I just want to read it over and over and over because for some reason, i'm enjoying the reality of the pain. Thank you s"
Posted by Unknown on "...She Played Violin Beautifully..." by SluG

"this was dripping in pain...it hurt to read.."
Posted by Sin on "...She Played Violin Beautifully..." by SluG

"desperation, crushing; the sense of helplessness and despair in this is vivid and real. Powerful write."
Posted by purr_verse on "...She Played Violin Beautifully..." by SluG

"Heartclenching write, the pain in this is even hard to read. The title pulls the poem all together, wonderful words."
Posted by K_Love on "...She Played Violin Beautifully..." by SluG

"The desperation and pain are so palpable here. Very emotional."
Posted by Carmina Gitana on "...She Played Violin Beautifully..." by SluG

"very good emotion exspressed here ~~GOTHIC~~"
Posted by Unknown on "...She Played Violin Beautifully..." by SluG

"What a beautiful write. Alexandra is a lucky person it would seem."
Posted by Gideon Lost on "Sunshine in the Window..." by SluG

"i really like the way this was ended.. nicely done..."
Posted by Zhee on "The eyes of hotel signs" by SluG

"i agree; it builds wonderfully, and the final two stanzas are fabulous. great write!"
Posted by purr_verse on "The eyes of hotel signs" by SluG

"this gets better and better as it reads on. excellent write."
Posted by stuart_pid on "The eyes of hotel signs" by SluG

"This was a great free verse...a great hidden meaning...Cheaters should die..."
Posted by BleedSilver on "The eyes of hotel signs" by SluG

"truly melted into this from the very beginning to the end, i like the title as well.. hmm.. and the candles flicker past time.. lovely write"
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "The eyes of hotel signs" by SluG

"interesting picture here..."
Posted by Twilight on "The beginning and end of a suicide" by SluG

"amazing it shows the realityof finally being able to just let it all go. Beautiful. -Munkey-"
Posted by Munkey on "The beginning and end of a suicide" by SluG

"OMG adam that is sad it makes me want to cry"
Posted by Unknown on "The beginning and end of a suicide" by SluG

"i like this one it is great. i feel like that all the time. "
Posted by Unknown on "The beginning and end of a suicide" by SluG

"I think i could cry, but i've finished crying for now... This is exactly how i feel right now...Thank you for writing down an agony I cant express at the moment"
Posted by Solace on "The beginning and end of a suicide" by SluG

"very raw image of an unfortunate reality...-l-"
Posted by Spiritus_Frumenti on "The beginning and end of a suicide" by SluG

"this is great! i like the format and the completely unexpected last line - clever and witty and all-round nice work... :) purr"
Posted by purr_verse on "The beginning and end of a suicide" by SluG

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