Comments by All Members
- "Your structuring style lends well to this piece. The hyphenations help accentuate certain parts, 'Hal-f- Torn'...I like it, your writing is interesting and original. Poetic work here, cool post
-NN"
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "Maggot-Go-Round." by Strataic
- "Very neat, well-written... "..caressed magic from Moon-vivid illusions; and As whispers wrangled senses, We found the ground-This wraith became me..." I like it. No offense, but I appreciate when someone points a typo out to me; 'one leg to many' supposed to be 'too', or did I misread? If so, my mistake; either way, awesome post!
-NN"
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "A Poets Electrified Paper" by Strataic
- "Hey this was pretty GD good, you ever read something and immediatly think "DAmn i Wish i coulda wrote that" lol, yes it was fucking awesome, yall should do more of these double team works, there immaculant"
Posted by Unknown on "Incidental (Feat. Symbol)" by Strataic
- ""This girl would watch
At wigwam pace because--
Instead of learning
Who and how...
Our dry hearts, pumped dust." I love this... xoxo"
Posted by xZombie Poptartzx on "Wigwam Pixie" by Strataic
- "A stimulating and complex write, I really enjoyed it ~^_^~ Now I need to break out the dictionary, lol"
Posted by blue angel on "Wigwam Pixie" by Strataic
- "I couldn't comment earlier when I first read it, but all I gotta say is "I wanna see this live"! utterly breathtakingly wonderful... 10/10 "
Posted by Star on "Demon Dancer - Short Story" by Strataic
- "Oh my goodness... Can I have your autograph? Damn Mister, now this .... is by far AMAZING, for spectators this is such a tortuous dance to watch, so beautifully described and worded and the ending even made me chuckle, "to practice" Now this is something certainly worth 10/10 rated and a bookmark~ Utterly exquisite in the way it is written and magnificent overall! Bravo~ I do hope you write some more! x"
Posted by Symbol on "Demon Dancer - Short Story" by Strataic
- "I've read some of your work so far and it's very intriguing, also this sort of abstracted but short, is there a longer poem of perhaps 4-8 line stanza? I would love to read it. Thanks for the read :)"
Posted by Unknown on "These Feelings" by Strataic
- "This is so amazingly beautiful.. it's incredibly well written and definately comes straight from your heart.. intoxicating, beautiful, and real. I love it. Thanks for sharing it. So glad I came across it!"
Posted by Unknown on "Because Love Is..." by Strataic
- "omg this is so beautiful. everyone feels this in their life time when they're in love with someone. beautifully written (: "
Posted by Star on "These Feelings" by Strataic
- "It is the same for me~ You know it *Face twitch* :P ♥ Keep writing beautifully my Mister :)"
Posted by Symbol on "These Feelings" by Strataic
- "i am so in love with love. i think it makes us whole it completes us and it makes life worth living every waking hour with the love your in love with. i say i love you to my gf everyday, 5 times a day. and i mean it, after so many years together i feel that flame inside us. and you my friend have this flame. it needs fuel to keep it burning. say what you feel. communication is the key to longevity. awesome cipher!"
Posted by haunted on "Because Love Is..." by Strataic
- "awe how cute and i bet i know who this is for. you guys are so sweet and i can you pouring it out of your heart cipher. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "These Feelings" by Strataic
- "how it takes time to get use to someone and believe in them as more than just that nervous feeling... you penned it down just right..."
Posted by Unknown on "These Feelings" by Strataic
- "I think 'some-thing' is a key thought here, because what exactly is it? more wonderfully rendered sentiments. the muse is strong with you ;-)"
Posted by Patches on "These Feelings" by Strataic
- "Clearly Established And Heartfelt...
I Got Lost In My Memories While Reading This.
Congrats Man You Captured My Imagination."
Posted by Unknown on "Because Love Is..." by Strataic
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