Comments by All Members
- "EC, thanks for the acknowledgement in the third line (HA!) - got me breating heavy. This was great and I could hear the tinkle of rat's feet over broken glass in the alley. Marvelous!"
Posted by dwells on "WannaBe" by Electric-Chair
- "definitely a beautiful tribute. if only this could be posted at every entrance. you read mikeshank1989?. you should he is the poster child for this tribute."
Posted by Devilish on "WannaBe" by Electric-Chair
- "I+m,so,sorry,for,your,loss..and,your,pain,.this,was,a,good,poem,btw."
Posted by Unknown on "Moments after Point Blank" by Electric-Chair
- "Sleeping with the demon.Is he aidding you ? Are you abetting it. I'm from the South and we have a saying in the deep South, spainish moss grows best
on the arms of the innocent."
Posted by midnights voice on "Sleeping Demon" by Electric-Chair
- "Woooh Man, lol "How could my own pen have such audacity?" This is an amazing write- it made me laugh but I could also see the seriousness of some of it behind the comical words. This is deserving of a ten. Thanks for the entertaining and really well written out read. Such great flow and rhyme, glad I read this one today :)"
Posted by Symbol on "Sinister Ink" by Electric-Chair
- "Love this line- "It wears the key to my soul on a tether around its neck." Having the key to the soul tethered round it's neck... Cheers for the write. Nice one ;)"
Posted by Symbol on "Sleeping Demon" by Electric-Chair
- "Oh my god. I got chills much respect. My cousin Jesse shot himself he was 18. i love him still . to me it takes all the heart in the world to go that way. fuck what anyone else says. im so sorry for your pain. it never gets easier to deal with to me. but i respect the fuck out of this poem its so raw and real and hits like a ton of bricks to the gut. much love. "
Posted by Devilish on "Moments after Point Blank" by Electric-Chair
