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Moments after Point Blank
By Electric-Chair
Moments after Point Blank
Thoughts of Heaven or Hell
As one tear gently fell
The last anguished exhale
Click!
Blinding flash of fiery light
For one moment lit the blacken night
Deafening bang echoed boom
Filled the once silent room.
Profound red and Fragmented lead
Shattered head
Freeing all your tortuous thoughts that life once bred.
All your past Dreams in flight with matter
Stain the wall like an artist canvas
Paint brush roughly splatters.
You precious mass
Bend in slump
Your soul given its final pass
Moments after Point Blank, is now in the past.
R.I.P My Dear Brother
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Copyright 2012 Electric-Chair
Published on Wednesday, September 12, 2012.
Filed under: "Philosophical" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "Moments after Point Blank"
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A former member wrote:
I+m,so,sorry,for,your,loss..and,your,pain,.this,was,a,good,poem,btw.
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On Wednesday, September 12, 2012, Devilish
(2633)
wrote:
Oh my god. I got chills much respect. My cousin Jesse shot himself he was 18. i love him still . to me it takes all the heart in the world to go that way. fuck what anyone else says. im so sorry for your pain. it never gets easier to deal with to me. but i respect the fuck out of this poem its so raw and real and hits like a ton of bricks to the gut. much love.
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A former member wrote:
This poem is simple but strong. It brought tears to my eyes and I applaud you for writing this.
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A former member wrote:
I'm speechless on this one, all i got to say is fuck.... I read your other poem before this one and my friend you write true, your brilliant.
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On Wednesday, September 12, 2012, Electric-Chair
(121) wrote:
Thank you, writing this poem is only thing that helped me deal with my brothers death,
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