Comments by All Members
- "'Held within the lyrics of this rhyme'- with this brief work, you manage to give us a glimpse of your mind indeed. The rhymes are delicious, well paced. Fits a song."
Posted by Nimue44 on "For Sarawithap" by creature
- "ouchies... hits a bit too close to home. a hypnotized grimace facing the mirror. cool."
Posted by Unknown on "jagged soul" by creature
- "Yea the hits keep on rolling for now but it gets better eventually sometimes. Thank you for reading. "
Posted by creature on "A Darkend Soul." by creature
- "Ouch- U seem in pain. A battered and bruised heart is what I have- from everything this world has to offer. I can strongly relate to this. Thanks for the read. "
Posted by Symbol on "A Darkend Soul." by creature
- "Nice post-There are a lot of us out here that can commiserate with you. My first poem is called Insomnia- check it out- sleep evaded me for so long I had to write about it... not a fun club to be in!"
Posted by Invisible Girl on "the lonely drunk insomniac " by creature
- "This work is touching. It tugs the tears to your eyes. Great work and its different but very well written. Almost like you could sing it. I hope you stay with us at DP. You seem to fit in well ^.^ great work. and Welcome :)"
Posted by BrokenKatra on "The man with the metal eyes" by creature
- "I love the way you drew focus down to the miniscule ... ' I can hear the lead breaking against the fibres of the paper' ... time really did seem to slow down to an intense reverberating tension...funny how the pace of time seems to alter depending on our mental state ... thanks for posting..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "The earache in my eyes" by creature
- "Well is when i was at the shop trying to draw a unique tattoo for my friend and had art block on a really slow day while listening to the cover by Korn waiting to leave and go home. This is the result, no picture lots of nonsense."
Posted by creature on "The earache in my eyes" by creature
- "Read this because the title made me think of cheech and chong " earache my eye! Your going to school!!" But it was interesting. Nice post"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "The earache in my eyes" by creature
- "Hell yeah. Different and beautiful. Hello there and welcome to darkpoetry.. roam around and read others as it will lead them back to you as well. if you eva need anything i'm a click away. dont be a stranger;. "
Posted by Devilish on "The man with the metal eyes" by creature
- "I totally agree with what you are saying here. Death is unpredictable, it could happen whenever. So that is probably why they say 'Live your life to the fullest' You don't live forever. "
Posted by Symbol on "Untimely Death" by creature
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