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- "Just so you know I have pre planned buying a motor vehicle so I can find you and tie you up and make you recite these things to me so I can hear it like a song bird.. lol.. sorry I am just sick I guess. "
Posted by Devilish on "Ensorcelling " by Maladroit
- "such romantic musings... how poets dream. I liked the last line, always good to end on a memorable note. I think you have a repeated word in the beginning, "would would label" ... are band-aids ever worth their weight in latex? thanks. "
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Sex with a Box" by Maladroit
- "I love the amount of knowledge you packed inside of each metophor, how cleverly you constructed each stanza. This is an interesting and refershing way of writing I thouroughly enjoy it & am eexcited to see more."
Posted by Unknown on "Neutered Limbic system" by Maladroit
- "As I pull back the sheets,
one fleeting moment of panic- How must I smell?
Like sticky, midnight, summer sex and a hint of an unnamed lover?.. You never ever ever fail to give me chills all over my body.. Your fucking amazing. damnnnnnnnnn.................."
Posted by Devilish on "Ensorcelling " by Maladroit
- "I like the way the beginning metaphor can work with psychotropic drugs... the neutering is in the bottle/box... and words become labels, as the box empties, maybe... I keep thinking pill bottle rather than box. Love breeds autism, a thoughtful line... how we seek out a new label every time a definition fails... a word fails...... when love fails. anyway, thanks, intriguing write."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Neutered Limbic system" by Maladroit
- "Method to my madness: Limic system is the part of the brain that controls and regulates emotions (neutering it is often a desire of mine) .. nothing is definative in psychology, labels, and/or pills.. (all in which have contributed to chapters in my life) Nobody likes to say they don't know what is really wrong.. and autism, is the most elusive 'impairment' of them all: as is love... many autistic people speak in metaphors and analogies, always trying to relate two opposite things as one.. and I feel love makes me a smudge autistic. "
Posted by Maladroit on "Neutered Limbic system" by Maladroit
- "To me it sounds like being sick of everyone pretending they're not pretending.. And not knowing what they don't know... A lovely write, even if I'm wrong... ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "Neutered Limbic system" by Maladroit
- "i really dig the way you write. i'm not exactly sure i get it, though. love is selfish? rigid and often detached? either way, well penned."
Posted by dramamine on "Neutered Limbic system" by Maladroit
- "hmmm I think I have an overactive amygdala and an underactive orbitofrontal cortex for starters :P ...your intro made me think of post-it-notes that aren't read or understood and also the attaching of labels to people or personalities...autism is a label attached to a diverse range of (human)beings ... as a 'withdrawal' from 'reality' I sometimes enter a self imposed autistic state I think...I'm not sure what you were thinking but that's what you brought to mind ... :)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Neutered Limbic system" by Maladroit
- "Oh my god .. You should be illegal. I inhale your words like drugs. Powerful for each syllable .. You should get paid for every letter.. A B C .. Love it you.. "
Posted by Devilish on "Neutered Limbic system" by Maladroit
- "I need to reread this a few times to get the full meaning. When I read it again, I will try my best to write something more intellectually reinforcing. Excellent job."
Posted by GhettoZombie on "Neutered Limbic system" by Maladroit
- "Absolutely love this. I am drawn to this style of writing, as I rarely see it. Lovely, lovely, lovely. "
Posted by Unknown on "Organic You" by Maladroit
- "what an intelligent beautiful work :) emotional and authentic.."i purge your emotions" shows how you understand the other but also sacrificing a part of yourself for them, maybe? i sense pain and hurt but also waiting with hope...very crafty indeed "
Posted by DarkBlueClearWater on "Organic You" by Maladroit
- "awesome poem maladroit. you have some really good observations and tolerance. well written my friend!"
Posted by haunted on "Organic You" by Maladroit
- "very cool piece!! the metaphors used painted the most wonderful imagery...welcome to dp. and thank you for posting:)"
Posted by natalie on "Organic You" by Maladroit
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