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- "If you survived then it was small caliber or wet powder perhaps. Russin roulette was not meant to go beyond a consecutive 5, assuming this was a 6 shot revolver. Scary piece well presented and almost too real, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Single-Bullet Theory" by Melancholic VIncent
- "Well this can be your interpretation, that is what you saw in it which is always valid. I guess it has something to do with the industrial world and the decadence it brings, ending with an Armaggedon of tecnology. Thanks for the compliment."
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Midnight alignment" by Melancholic VIncent
- "Reminiscent of the Bhuddist wheel of life I think it is? Not sure if anything new is learned with the new beginning. Really enjoyed the flavor of this piece approaching the final midnight hour, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Midnight alignment" by Melancholic VIncent
- "I'd like to know more about what you meant. This is just a creation from me rather than what i feel, i mean, i have no suicidal thoughts, and i don't want to encourage any behaviour towards that. If this was a sign of warning of what you don't want to do, then I am happy that i've been of help. One of the best things about DarkPoetry community is that we can help each other :)"
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Single-Bullet Theory" by Melancholic VIncent
- "Thanks for the contribution, i thought i could be a less obvious, instead of calling air planes, i compared it to birds, and instead of tanks, i could call them something different, I tried to name them as people would have named them when they saw them for the first time"
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "The Great War" by Melancholic VIncent
- "Divine wind is perhaps the literal translation, and a great Chinese fleet of warships was smashed in the last attempted invasion circa 1600's maybe?
This was a great write and the style was different but in a good way, with unusual word choices that only added to an other-worldly feel perhaps, cheers and much enjoyed."
Posted by dwells on "The Great War" by Melancholic VIncent
- "Thanks, "winds of god" i think is the translation of kamikaze, so i put it instead of kamikaze, i don't know if it is noticeable. I wanted to show the horror of war as something personal and vividly. Even if i never went to war.... "
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "The Great War" by Melancholic VIncent
- "...this is very good, considering that English isn't your mother language. it has a darkly abstract quality to it, & certainly depicts the horror & destructive force of the weapons of war."
Posted by FadedBlues on "The Great War" by Melancholic VIncent
- "I cant remember him But many times i wonder how would be his life if he was still alive. Is he lucky for not becoming a witness of our broken family? Who knows... I dont dare to answer it, i just wonder about the question... Thanks for the support."
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Where art thou my brother?" by Melancholic VIncent
- "This one was fictional fortunately :) But thanks for your empathy. Everything that talks about something vivid that really happened or that talks about something in my life, it will be shown as a personal.
When i feel enraged, i imagine things as if they were burning, or it seems like my body explodes from within. This happened more, some years ago, when i felt more anger. Sometimes i look into the sky and imagine it red as if judgement was about to fall on us. I'd like to understand more about this, but i still don't understand too much about it. "
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Phoenix Nest" by Melancholic VIncent
- "Thanks for the comment.
We die with the choices we make, for another self to take place.
This poem is about the process that we go through when making choices, the one before the choices and the one after, are completely diferent, and as one can only see back through the past and not into the future, we are condemned to retrace every step that led to the choices we made, some of those choices are trivial, but others we regret for our whole life.
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Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Metamorphosis" by Melancholic VIncent
- "Thank you for the comment. This one is about the things and people that i lost yes, but it's more grief about life, the ones that couldn't understand me therefore caused damage that not even they know. "
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "My dire diary" by Melancholic VIncent
- "Thank you for comenting, it is always apreciated!
Life is a journey, it is what make it hard, that make us worthy, i believe every single on of the people here in this community of dark poetry, had their share of troublesome experience, that's what made them rich on the inside."
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "My dire diary" by Melancholic VIncent
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