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- "I highly advise you not to feed karen after midnight... she turns into something no librarian would want to encounter... now back to the write... for this to be uninspired is an understatement... if i could write this well when i was uninspired i would jump up and down for joy... Excellent read... "
Posted by BlackVelvet Rose on "Silence in the Library" by Melancholic VIncent
- "Nice one. This poem really reminds me of Resident Evil, also called Bio-hazard in the Japanese versions.... funny coincidence, isn't it? ^^"
Posted by Unknown on "Bio-Hazard " by Melancholic VIncent
- "Interesting subject, many times I ponder my actual poetic ability if I'd have just one day of inspiration.. At least we know a lot of those times are the reason we're unsuccessful. Nicely done."
Posted by Unknown on "Silence in the Library" by Melancholic VIncent
- "At the time I wrote this, I was used to deal with everything that was happening with my mind already, but it was good to put it all in a poem like this. Since I'm 13 years old, I always thought I had some sort of mental illness... Turns out that I have a lot of traces of several mental illnesses but I don't have enough to make a diagnosis, maybe it's better this way.... I can be... interesting without being ill. Thanks for this."
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Pathological Cocktail" by Melancholic VIncent
- "Thank you for your comment. When you say, banging against the wall, it would seem you are referring to your experience of love, you tried and you tried time and time again which resulted in so much pain afterwards because it wasn't meant to fit.... That's what it seems. Have hope! Relationships are complicated and some are not meant to be, incompatible, it doesn't have to mean that is something wrong with us, sometimes it's something wrong with them, others.... we are just incompatible. Thank you so much for commenting :)"
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Alchemy of Emotions" by Melancholic VIncent
- "This use to take up a lot of space in my life also. You write in unmatched detail. It seems that minimalist writing is taking the front seat these days, with myself as no exclusion. This reminds me of the importance of purging emotions. If I continue to offer elusive writing, I can't expect to gain a lot of "me too" in an audience. There is a lot of power in letting things like this hang all out. "
Posted by Maladroit on "Pathological Cocktail" by Melancholic VIncent
- "Love, much like fumbling with electrical outlets in the dark, grants fleeting moments triumph when it fits the first try.. Unlike the majority of time, where we are banging against the wall to make something fit, a thousand times over. That's what it reminded me of.. "
Posted by Maladroit on "Alchemy of Emotions" by Melancholic VIncent
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