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- "There is no warning for the mistakes made, regrets should never be held onto, a choice was made for the best... the old you has gone, let it define the newer you for change is hard to hold onto. thanks for the read vinc"
Posted by Detriment on "Metamorphosis" by Melancholic VIncent
- "Yep, unfortunately, mistakes shape us into another version for the future. But they teach us so much. People only learns that the fire burns when they burn themselves that one time in their childhood."
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Metamorphosis" by Melancholic VIncent
- "Amazing stuff- thanks for commenting on my work ;) I see what you mean in this poem- mistakes, we all make them- it's a human trait unfortunately. But if we never make our mistakes we never learn right? So I accept my mistakes so I can just improve myself."
Posted by Symbol on "Metamorphosis" by Melancholic VIncent
- "I like this poem, it speaks to me Surreal is an escape...We aspire to the impossible...isn't that how the greatest works are done? I enjoyed reading, thanx"
Posted by BloodCountess on "Being Human" by Melancholic VIncent
- "Indeed. Also, it's an hypothetical vision of the world taking the pride of people too far. It's a wake up call to those who valor more the doctors than the known as lesser jobs. People forget the importance of the simple tasks and only remember certain jobs in society. Thanks for stopping by"
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Lesser of Two Evils" by Melancholic VIncent
- "Deleted another old comment after further perusal - maybe John Doe is beyond the reach of some, gifted beyond the norm, and that is the cross to bear, cheers! And sometimes we can make ourselves crazy too (and save them the trouble)."
Posted by dwells on "Portrait of John Doe" by Melancholic VIncent
- "All those loose ends.. perhaps if they are braided they would be more easily handled?
Gather them up my friend and bind them!
You have the power- claim it!"
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Loose Ends" by Melancholic VIncent
- "I like this, it's different, refreshing, and unique thanks for sharing the scattered senselss workings of your inner mind. "
Posted by Unknown on "Loose Ends" by Melancholic VIncent
- "At the time I made it, I had some random thoughts and phrases that I didn't know how to fit together, and then I made this. Yes I have to do something more with more light. Thanks for the comment Dan "
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Loose Ends" by Melancholic VIncent
- "Tying them up nicely and there will always be those loose ends to contend with - nevertheless, the fewer the better and how about some tight ends maybe? (no football puns)"
Posted by dwells on "Loose Ends" by Melancholic VIncent
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