Comments by All Members
- "I fancy how this all evolves, the rhyme and I find the ending melancholy, you managed to bring about the last few lines in such a soft way when they carry quite a heavy meaning... in a way it has really stuck ...and somehow settled in my chest as I finished reading. Well done~ Don't go just yet Mister. "
Posted by Symbol on "A boys last goodbye." by devilsrighthand
- "The worst nightmare I had was so bad I ended up sleepwalking into my parent's room and started hitting them. But anyway I really enjoyed the striking description, especially the part about the sheets having a hold on your legs:) awesome write and looking forward to more."
Posted by Unknown on "Closed mind" by devilsrighthand
- "a very suffocating feeling, one can feel the words from textbooks weighing on your soul... may exams always produce such work !"
Posted by Unknown on "Closed mind" by devilsrighthand
- "Damn this felt really claustrophobic, everything enclosing in, leaving you gasping for air, making everything seem surreal. Excellent work."
Posted by Unknown on "Closed mind" by devilsrighthand
- "Okay excuse me for my language...
BUT DON'T YOU FUCKING DARE!
Please don't die on us, seriously I don't want you leaving, you have so much to live for and many people to back you up! "
Posted by Unknown on "Just Gotta Run Away" by devilsrighthand
- "What happened to him? I'm so sorry you had to go through this, I've never experienced anything like this but i'm sure I will in time, one of life's many certainties. I hope you're coming around alright, take care of yourself and thank you for sharing."
Posted by Gray Vision on "I love you, man." by devilsrighthand
- "i wish i could give you the biggest hug ever in existence. toke and play his favorite tunes. i'm sure he'll be there in spirit. chin up, little love. he was far too young and full of potential, it seems, but instead of giving up because of it, strive to make his memory proud. maybe he can live adventures vicariously through you. who knows? much love, and know i am always here, baby bro. :( My poor Royce."
Posted by Unknown on "I love you, man." by devilsrighthand
- "I'm very sorry to read this righthandman , I have been in the same situation , waiting , feeling equal measures or incredible grief mixed with anger and helplessness at the injustice of it all ... blessings for you both ~"
Posted by kinkifrog on "I love you, man." by devilsrighthand
- "No words can heal a heart in this type of situation. I offer my condolences and painfully regret your situation. My sister was killed at age 22 by a drunk driver, two months before my 21st Birthday. You sir, write beautifully and I know he is honored to have called you his brother. I pray he wakes up... (((hugs)))"
Posted by soul_versing on "I love you, man." by devilsrighthand
- "I'm so sorry, I send condolences to you and your family...I hope he does wake up and sees how much you care about him .
Look if you need to talk feel free to message me or something, I really want to help :)"
Posted by Unknown on "I love you, man." by devilsrighthand
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