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- "suddenly you've extracted from me such heavy emotion I'm not to familiar with... saying that this piece transfixed me into your method of coping.. this was composed very well..you are the artist painting the sun where everyone was clouded..crowded..I could never devise the effect of a lost one..tried playing it in my mind in a troubling time.. I see you are a good hearted person ..I imagine this task with difficulty but Im unsure.. it hit a dark place within and I only hope we continue to accept were not perfect.. I say great punctuation made it enjoyably smooth reading...each line is worth its capturing utterance... thanks for the braveness,i hope for the best"
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "If I Say It, That Makes It Real" by RoseTheBrokenHearted
- "RoseTheBrokenHearted I am sorry that you have gone through sad and dark times but I love what it leads to in your writing! You are very talented and it seems to flow so naturally. Beautiful lullaby,"
Posted by imfine on "Dark Lullabye For You " by RoseTheBrokenHearted
- "Another dark poem from you my friend! I love the way you express your feelings, even they are so sad. It reminded a song from Akira Yamaoka called "Room Of Angel" . If you haven't heard it, i suggest you do! Have a nice day and I'll see you around!"
Posted by Unknown on "Dark Lullabye For You " by RoseTheBrokenHearted
- "Oh, God, this poem gives me a feeling like... I don't know how else to describe it but "shitty". Yeah, it gives me a "shitty" feeling. That's NOT to say the poem is shitty- It's actually freakin' fantastic. The image I get while reading it, though, is off this cold, distant faux-lover who can't seem to treat the speaker with the respect and affection they deserve. THAT's why I get a "shitty" feeling from it... And it's really awesome that you were able to conjure that feeling in me. "
Posted by Queazenart on "To Be In Love With You" by RoseTheBrokenHearted
- "Good perspective poetry here and I can feel the subject. The tone is somber and somewhat seductive if that makes sense. I enjoyed this and it kept my attention throughout. Nice work."
Posted by tmanzano on "To Be In Love With You" by RoseTheBrokenHearted