Comments by All Members
- "very heartfelt and emotional. i think my favorite line is "will you stop and scream....and tell me its not all just a dream! that gave me shivers. i love it. you have great talent! excellent!"
Posted by haunted on "When You Leave" by ExaCute
- "Sometimes people do things without even realizing they're hurting others around them, which in itself can be problematic. I like to think that we always leave a resonating verse in someone life story, just as your work here has with mine. "
Posted by Skye on "When You Leave" by ExaCute
- "Very forlorn and insecure piece that I guess comes from past experience perhaps. Some guys would rather phone it in (chickens). Best of luck to you EC!"
Posted by dwells on "When You Leave" by ExaCute
- "it has an intense romantic Gothic feel.. i was was drawn in by the elegant style of your writing. it sort of reminds me of some of my own poetry. much enjoyed this hun"
Posted by Unknown on "Graveyard" by ExaCute
- " ''i don't need there judgement
their hate their wicked ways
i'll stay here traped like a little bird
in my cage''... good work is easy to enjoy, thanks for sharing"
Posted by dumbone on "A Little Bird" by ExaCute
- "...in the last line: the scholar in me says 'crys' sb 'cries', but the poet says the word looks kinda cool & comfortable sitting there the way it is..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "The Game of Life" by ExaCute
- "ya i love your poetry...and i'm still trying to figure the site out but i'll get it soon enof lol...just wish i had all my newer poetry they were much more indepth and more in the word play"
Posted by ExaCute on "A Thousand Love Songs And None Fit You" by ExaCute
- "damn that fuckin sucks.. after i got a laptop i stopped writing all my shit and instead ran to the keyboard so i should start writing them again incase that happens cause that would be a bitch.. ok ill go and add you .. too cool .. im glad you liked my poem in her panties. if that is the kind you like then you should definitely read well you see doc .. well just work your way around them when you feel like it.. i appreciate a reader and so i shall return the favor always. im diggin you being here already..lol. "
Posted by Devilish on "A Thousand Love Songs And None Fit You" by ExaCute
- "i'll take in each breath
and say these rymes over again
to let them fall short to any
who would hear
why leave my vocal shards
in the tea to cool their day
could i really be that foolish
and hurt you any way
..................... Sweeeeeeet shit here!!! . hello again. thank you for reading me.. get out there a lil more so others can feel you .. the notion of feel is almost sweeter than the host of agony.. I love tattoos by the way.. ive only got two one under my eye and the other across my lower back that read devilish in sick lettering i would love more but everyone is too fucking spun out to keep the lines from looking jagged.. lol. fucking tweekers what are we gonna do with them.. (fills the pipe back up).. i would love to see your stuff do you have a FB?.. "
Posted by Devilish on "A Thousand Love Songs And None Fit You" by ExaCute
- "A poem for a school thing?. well it leaves me wondering if that means something to you.. We all have our talents .. you love music a tattoo artist well i believe you can add poetry to that list cause you can write! pretty dark a lil sinister classy i like that. hello there and welcome to Darkpoetry.. Roam around and read others as it will bring them back to you as well.. if you eva need anything i'm a click away.. i normally dont refer anyone to read me due to getting HIGHLY offended but for some reason I think you might like my shit..lol. maybe check out my poem sick from the cradle or come here little girl.. "
Posted by Devilish on "Graveyard" by ExaCute
- "This poem agonizes and bleeds a story all on it's own. This is the broken poetry that appeals to me. The last lines inspired a hope of sorts. It describes a dejected and demoralized picture of the faniful and perfect ones we make for others. It can be hard finding out that the ones we have fallen so far for don't realize or don't share the love that we give out. Enjoyed most thuroughly. Thanks for the post, and welcome to DP!"
Posted by The_Broken_Fox_2112 on "A Thousand Love Songs And None Fit You" by ExaCute
