When You Leave

By ExaCute

when you leave

would you stop to say goodbye

would you hold me and tell me

things will be alright

when your gone

will you just tell me it was all a lie

and that its okay to want to cry

will you stop and scream

and tell me its not all just a dream

and that life is never

going to be as easy as others make it seem

when you leave

will you take with you all the memories

and leave me with nothing but the emptyness

of all the things that use to mean so much to me

when your gone

will you forget about me?

or am i just another chapter in your life
 

when you leave.....

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Copyright 2012 ExaCute
Published on Tuesday, May 22, 2012.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • haunted On Tuesday, May 22, 2012, haunted (850)By person wrote:

    very heartfelt and emotional. i think my favorite line is "will you stop and scream....and tell me its not all just a dream! that gave me shivers. i love it. you have great talent! excellent!

  • ExaCute On Tuesday, May 22, 2012, ExaCute (37)By person wrote:

    thank you greatly

  • dwells On Tuesday, May 22, 2012, dwells (4285)By person wrote:

    Very forlorn and insecure piece that I guess comes from past experience perhaps. Some guys would rather phone it in (chickens). Best of luck to you EC!

  • ExaCute On Tuesday, May 22, 2012, ExaCute (37)By person wrote:

    actualy about my dad who left

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