Comments by All Members
- "Wow this a very powerfully dark poem. But I’m with dwells on the pre-destination I just think you can change your fate any time you want. Love the poem
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Posted by Unknown on "You are Called" by Undertaker
- "That unknown dark date ... was June 8 2010 ..... ++++ I liked this a lot quite unalluminated ... acheronian forest is where they went .... thankyou ..was nice to read ~×"
Posted by Corinthian on "You are Called" by Undertaker
- "Not sure I believe in pre-destination but who can really say for sure? Guess we'll all find out eventually. This put me in mind of "Invictus" somewhat, well done, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "You are Called" by Undertaker
- "I am sorry to hear that Velvet... Death is something that is very hard to accept at times.. I also had a friend die last week in a motorcycle crash. Life is much more fragile then most know... This is why we must live life to our fullest. You have my deepest condolences. I hope time will heal the gap that you may have shared with this friend."
Posted by Undertaker on "You are Called" by Undertaker
- "This really hits home for me.....a friend that i work with was killed in a car crash this past thursday.....is sad but all the same no one knows when their date is"
Posted by Black Velvet Rose on "You are Called" by Undertaker
- "'if you stare too long into the abyss, the abyss will stare into you.' desperation, overwhelming sadness, and depression is like an abyss..it can pull you over the edge. a very clear, well written look into the mind of such a lost soul. thanks for the view."
Posted by natalie on "The Plagued Soul" by Undertaker
- "I do not know how the end plays, but it seems as if a horn with deep silence should blow... When someone is on the meer bed of death, flashbacks do occur as I myself have almost died falling off a cliff "accidently". I really saw everything in a flash and it happened so fast."
Posted by Undertaker on "The Plagued Soul" by Undertaker
- "To be beyond all hope and despairing another tomorrow. Never been there and never hope to but this paints an accurate portrait of the many who have gone before. Very classy and I can only say one thing Unde, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "The Plagued Soul" by Undertaker
- "a well told tale... a little part of it in everyone, maybe. I liked the horn about to blow ... is every death a horn blowing silently across an eerie sea breeze? the end always ushers in recollection, maybe. Thanks, much enjoyed.
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Posted by The Dybbuk on "The Plagued Soul" by Undertaker
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