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- "This is an amazing statement given in the style of a question I suppose. I wonder if it started as a question in you that you realized you already had the answer and all you did was pull it out.
After all is said and done, when we write of longing for someone to hold hands with do we also ask for the fortitude and faith that we would need to "make it" in such a longing under the circumstances you have stated.
Or as I seem to tell each new Girlfriend only to receive a look of great dismay, "Obviously if you and I were any good at this you and I wouldn't be climbing into bed now.
Well said,
Silver Spectre"
Posted by Silver Spectre on "The Art of Transcending" by BleedSilver
- "this poem fills me with the feeling of hollow submission...call it love, call it sacrifice...with nothing left to give I am yours...nicely crafted! "
Posted by Unknown on "I Am Yours" by BleedSilver
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An ouroboros of love, perhaps? I must admit that I was mesmerized by the sentiment ... a beautiful poem, is what comes to mind ... Devlin.
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Posted by Devil-lyn on "I Am Yours" by BleedSilver
- ""Can we fly on wings tattered and torn
By the pain in our troublesome past?" Can we, indeed? This entire writeup was full of honest analysis and emotional questioning. Excellent job :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "The Art of Transcending" by BleedSilver
- "god, this describes my life right now...everyone's gone and there's no one to talk to..it's hard...i spend a good part of the day on the brink of having a meltdown...awesome poem, absolutely brilliant"
Posted by Unknown on "I Never Could Breathe Alone..." by BleedSilver
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