Comments by All Members
- "Very enthralling...I would love to see it continued... I have one of my own I think you might enjoy. Thank you for sharing."
Posted by redfurrydragon on "Night Terrors." by jodeanna
- "I have a guilty infatuation with ballet, so combining that with both crippling sadness and a bit of existential confusion just creates the perfect poem for me. I'm glad this got featured on the front page, because it's really a treat. "
Posted by Queazenart on "& she danced against the violins." by jodeanna
- "Wow. You got me at a total shock at the end. When reality sinks in, someone feels like a... well, you know. Anyways, nice title and very cool details. =)"
Posted by Unknown on "yours for an hour." by jodeanna
- "My wife put a similar note in my lunch bag once, and I left work early and told the guys to have at it. Got an earful the next day - but I smiled the whole time, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "I Hope You Think of Me." by jodeanna
- "I can feel your love and devotion in every word of this, I'm sure he thinks of you every second of every day. This is a lovely pen. Thanks for sharing!"
Posted by Unknown on "I Hope You Think of Me." by jodeanna
- "awe this is so sweet. your in love i can tell and that makes this so beautiful. i love the idea about hiding this poem in his shirt pocket. i should do the same with my lover. i think that is a very flattering make the heart pitter patter kind of gesture. i love this! awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "I Hope You Think of Me." by jodeanna
- "yep.... those are the ones... and a thousand more little things... those are the things most delicate, the first to go, and yet, the ones that will haunt the longest. well conceived and composed. thanks."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "The Little Things, Honey." by jodeanna
- "ah yes.... how the furniture, the fixtures, the space can be filled with the past... and the future becomes a process of recollection as the now is consumed by what was, and what will be always a memory. time for a new sofa, indeed. thanks, I liked how this revolved around the object... objet petit a... a mature design for exploring the presence of absence. "
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Memories of a Couch." by jodeanna
- "This is a great piece! I have felt this way before and understand how you feel.. Burn the couch, keep the memories you want, and no more!! 10/10"
Posted by deathndismay on "Memories of a Couch." by jodeanna
- "Very intriguing, and so passionate. So many emotions can take place residence of a common couch and bring back precious memories. Love the ending as well, quirky and very cool."
Posted by DePriest on "Memories of a Couch." by jodeanna
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