Comments by All Members
- "You started with an emptiness and longing, and followed it through a moving current of air with a steady rhythm, only to wind up where you began. The feeling was constant, and the longing is familiar. I think I will have to re-read this several times."
Posted by Scarrzz on "The Scent of You" by Mistress Shadow
- "What is this scent that drifts into the endless dark upon a smoky breeze? Conjuring memories and toying with dreams... it seems as if the ideal mixes with the real... and the real must depart... swallowed, or frightened away? Is it love or longing that erases the lines of sanity? I love the way the smoke becomes a mysterious symbol transcending the work and resisting placement within the occasion... like the blurring of distinctions, perhaps. When will you be peaking in on me?"
Posted by Unknown on "The Scent of You" by Mistress Shadow
- "ah love poems that recast moments so eloquently and momentously... unique morning after perspective: annoyance. hmmm simple imagery becomes imbued with such complex meaning when rendered by your touch. "
Posted by Unknown on "Red Wine and Snow" by Mistress Shadow
- "brilliant! The way you captured the bittersweet with the tones of red wine and snow; something almost symbloically religious and earthy in the taste. Great to see you post and be (Sort of) active....at leas for you, Misstress Elusive would be more appropriate! An excellent passage-of-rites style tale; greatly written T :)"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Red Wine and Snow" by Mistress Shadow
- "Hmmm decided to check out your work as a courtesy I always try to return to people who take time to comment on my work. So glad I came, this is really beautiful work. I like this piece... In one word, majestic. Write on"
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Bucerias" by Mistress Shadow
- "A perfect moment captured. Like the hatter, I absolutely love the notion of gazing at the stars on the beach. These kind of memories keep us going."
Posted by nur hidayah on "Bucerias" by Mistress Shadow
- "I love the notion of staring at the stars on the beach....seems to me like this is a memory keen to repeat itself...beautifully rendered in a simplistic and relatable style....nice one T"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Bucerias" by Mistress Shadow
- "I know this feeling well, there is something about MX and the Caribbean that changes the phenomenology of time, that truly escapes cognition, a release and freedom that is limited only by those who fail to allow its presence. Beautiful... and yet, why is "
Posted by Unknown on "Bucerias" by Mistress Shadow
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