Comments by All Members
- "hello, your note says, sorry for the
language. i dont see any! i think sometimes the f-bomb comes in handy.
that would be appropriate for this one!
but still a great poem for an ass that wronged you! nice write."
Posted by haunted on "Liar Liar, Pants on Fire" by SmuggledOranges
- "thank you for this write. its hard to believe someone so young can write something so beautiful...then again, maybe only the young can write something so innocent. "
Posted by Grey Lies on "9.11" by SmuggledOranges
- "Wow. Amazing. It's interesting and is given more depth, to a reader, that it's a true story. Man, I wish I could write like this when I was fourteen...such a long time ago:P"
Posted by devilspoet on "Fire, Fire. " by SmuggledOranges
- "you wrote this tragic event with flair and good use of rhyme... sorry for your loss and thank you for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "Fire, Fire. " by SmuggledOranges
- "I had heard a noise one night and opened my front door and the neighbor across the ways apartment was on fire.. I grabbed my daughter and son and ran out and down the stairs... My daughter was also dressed in her princess gown and from the back of a car she watched the whole thing... Fires are the worst... Sorry for your loss..."
Posted by Devilish on "Fire, Fire. " by SmuggledOranges
- "you've painted a perfect picture in my mind...you've portrayed the confusion and fear so well and the final image and 'princess night gown', left me with a quiet sadness ... such innocence and tragedy ... sorry Miss "
Posted by kinkifrog on "Fire, Fire. " by SmuggledOranges
- "Glad nobody was hurt from the sound of things? Fire can be both good and evil, controlled or out of control; we forget the destructive nature too often."
Posted by dwells on "Fire, Fire. " by SmuggledOranges
- "hello, letting go is the hardest thing in the
world to let go of when its love.
and when theres jeolousy involved
it just kills it that much more. a good
perspective on love and what it does
when its over. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "Please, Darling. " by SmuggledOranges
- "wow i cant believe it has been 10 yrs already...also there is a plane that went down today in pa...its called flight 93 just sayin. that was a tragic day"
Posted by Star on "9.11" by SmuggledOranges
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