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- "That was a very interesting way of looking at it. The poem was very clever, and very well written. I wish it was longer, it was very good!xxx"
Posted by Unknown on "self" by the broken
- "This was beautifully written, the depreciation came through clearly and made my stomach ache. You're a beautiful boy and have many that love n support you. Never forget how sweet every emotion is, even the painful ones, that's what makes life worth living. Even the pain is addictive - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "to the grave i go..." by the broken
- "Damn... So many genius lines in this I don't think I could pick any one line and say it was the best... I have a fascination with death, can't wait to die myself, mostly out of simple curiosity. Hell would be a grand place I think. A really magnificent poem."
Posted by Unknown on "to the grave i go..." by the broken
- "I will not only cry but part of me will die with you.. i want you to be alive.. i am always here for you as much as i can possibly be, i am sorry you feel this way you are way to young and beautiful to want to die this early.. i wish i could take care of you ."
Posted by Devilish on "to the grave i go..." by the broken
- "THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS.
This poem says the truth of the mind.
You've been through a mind f*** really, I can tell. And its not fair that just because of what was done to you, now you have to be labelled. You are as normal as you can be after what you've been through.
*sorry you're hurting*"
Posted by TornPieces on "mentally unstable" by the broken
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