Comments by All Members
- "As like Drea... I come back to this (as you took away the 'doves') and reflect often, missing your work and words and overall the person behind them."
Posted by NikesRain on "Capsized SouL" by OLd SouL
- "I miss you! I come back to this every so often just to remember. I know it won't happen, but I wish you'd pop back in. Even briefly. "
Posted by Drea on "Capsized SouL" by OLd SouL
- "Such gorgeous rhinos. Most certainly earned POTD. A beautiful read. "I breathe echoes into sails" is such a vivid line. It'll stick in my head for a while. Thanks for sharing this."
Posted by Unknown on "Capsized SouL" by OLd SouL
- "a dove on a wire.... and cage-hands that can never know the freedom of such a perch, just trapped in words.... beauty... through and through. loved the sentiments, the pivoting image, the patient tone that considerately ponders such a plight...
such serenity on the edge of never again. *bows* thank you."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Dove (falling feathers)" by OLd SouL
- "i only just recently stumbled across this but it is very worthy of the poem of the day, reminds me almost of the scene in the last unicorn when the bull is lured into the sea. "
Posted by spikedwithLUST on "Capsized SouL" by OLd SouL
- "this is gorgeous sir. utterly. rhinos in the sea. such a heaviness, a heavy image and a the heavy heart it creates. such a scene of isolation, i can feel this. i only wish i had more this type of writing. welcome back :)"
Posted by spikedwithLUST on "Capsized SouL" by OLd SouL
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