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- "the mindless thralls that embrace the fetters of thier own servitude and your genius worl shall live on long after thier "
Posted by Anth on "As Satan Walks" by The Fallen Angel
- "DON'T TASTE OF THE FRUIT?! DON'T CREATE THE FRUIT!! i like that line.. hells bells i like the whole damn poem..i agree wholly excellent work."
Posted by Lord Kalgalath on "Riven" by The Fallen Angel
- "awsome job, that was refreshing.. i havent such a good poem like this in awhile, great job.. i wish i could make my mind write like that.. i probably could but it would take me forever to find the right words"
Posted by yslehc on "As Satan Walks" by The Fallen Angel
- "I dont know that i would call it sinister,more true in the get out of purgatory free card great job,like a vespers for the weary
Lileth"
Posted by Unknown on "Gray Skies" by The Fallen Angel
- "It has been much too long since I've read one of your poems. This rhythm just flew through my mind..."Baptism of raving flames, purity for impurity" This screamed out at me. Amazingly worded. "
Posted by Unknown on "The Evanescence Of A Goddess" by The Fallen Angel
- "nicely written i always have liked how you introduce and close your writes, they dont seem to drag either. nice work, im glad to see that you still hold the same style that holds people."
Posted by _Andrew_ on "The Evanescence Of A Goddess" by The Fallen Angel
- "loved the first stanza, truly beautiful. when faith revealeth...tragedy, pressure mounting upon pressure. well done."
Posted by Twilight on "Gray Skies" by The Fallen Angel
- "You do an excellent job of rhyming, except for one line that I think sounds forced (It is a burning flood in my eyes). I know what you mean about calmness... it is indeed often deceiving."
Posted by stormtalk on "The Calm" by The Fallen Angel
- "an adventure... you take me on an adventure into spaces I've not ever gone before... thank you."
Posted by Mr King on "Judas" by The Fallen Angel
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