The Evanescence Of A Goddess
By The Fallen Angel
Paints my face in shadowed smog
Suffocates me in its fog
Black beyond my broke abyss
It's most punishment in this
Call upon my broken name
Love that makes ago insane
Punishment is where you'll sow
And seems there nothing that I know
Appointed judgement from the sea
Shifts in solemn misery
Baptism of raving flames
Purity for impurity
Only in the eyes of hate
Watching shapes inferno makes
Find us in the darkest place
Bind by manacles of bawl disgrace
Indescretions none my own
Legion shadows ere unknown
Tormented by phantom geist
Isolate of come respite
I beckon you my one winged goddess
Share the cry of countless operas
I know longer hear your hymn
Cloaked in Sin
When fading in
Calling to embrace your skin
But your words fade in smoke shade gray
Soul is lost, no eminence
Song of a goddess silenced
Like a candle dwindles from a cold hollow breath
A heart warming prominence no more
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Comments on "The Evanescence Of A Goddess"
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On Tuesday, March 16, 2004, one-fanged vision
(7) wrote:
it haunts meso beautifully, excellent poetry. I envy :P %fanged
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A former member wrote:
Third verse is amazing. +T.P.U+
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A former member wrote:
It has been much too long since I've read one of your poems. This rhythm just flew through my mind..."Baptism of raving flames, purity for impurity" This screamed out at me. Amazingly worded.
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On Wednesday, February 18, 2004, _Andrew_
(245) wrote:
nicely written i always have liked how you introduce and close your writes, they dont seem to drag either. nice work, im glad to see that you still hold the same style that holds people.
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On Tuesday, February 17, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti
(340) wrote:
a most entrancing piece....-l-