Comments by All Members
- "This big dark nightmare it seems.. where nothing actually weighted..real.. everything seems to be moving in slow motion..backwards..contradictions in here used very well .. unique thought to pen.."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Nihil Obstat" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "oh im so glad you are back, i like this change of style, the length. we get a more vivid picture here. love the use of contradictions, love the idea of dreams. please write more :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Nihil Obstat" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "this sounds like serious loss from losing a loved one
and emptiness whilst reading out a poem on them...im sorry to hear of this
very strong choices of words though ."
Posted by Unknown on "Memory Staccato" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "crescendo? no forte? no mezzo? this held a certain spell of disaster amidst the brevity of emotives. i could never master the style of a short imperative...i prattle....and this makes me feel like lighting a candle and considering everything i feel and how anyone i give those feelings to feels as well...how i am nothing much but a bountiful tangle of wrecking feelings......"
Posted by Unknown on "Slaves & Bulldozers" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "a short ravaging......it does set the mind ablaze, the touch of that someone....and i mean all touches: words, looks, innuendos, thoughts, and tangibles of course..........simply said. "
Posted by Unknown on "Truth" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
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