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Slaves & Bulldozers
By Crush_With_Eyeliner
Everything I've shown
is what I feel.
No use to
disguise
the obvious.
It was all flow - :
no ebb.
It was all
crescendo.
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Copyright 2010 Crush_With_Eyeliner
Published on Friday, November 19, 2010.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Slaves & Bulldozers"
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A former member wrote:
crescendo? no forte? no mezzo? this held a certain spell of disaster amidst the brevity of emotives. i could never master the style of a short imperative...i prattle....and this makes me feel like lighting a candle and considering everything i feel and how anyone i give those feelings to feels as well...how i am nothing much but a bountiful tangle of wrecking feelings......
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A former member wrote:
such as short piece but very powerful to me, that last line...wow, what a perfect way to close.
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