Comments by All Members
- "And I would not know who to pity most. So it is humor when everyone loss. It is a morbid poem to me, a poem about loss and shadow dancing. It was achieved even befor the ending. Achieved becouse everything was wraped in shadows, and choked... "
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "Forced Precision" by Dancing_Monkey
- "Insist on living it hehe ... Degrade these scenarios these people, endlessly in your mind. It is wondefull to watch and a great laugh. I can not pity it, when everyone is an outsider. "
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "Forced Precision" by Dancing_Monkey
- "think twice? .. i don't think i'll be able to stop thinking about it now ... you amaze me .. spoken so clearly in broken lens snapshot --
haunt my house .... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "Forced Precision" by Dancing_Monkey
- "i agree...this was quite the ride and the beginning images made me laugh...and i couldnt help but picture a drug induced night of kink, i just knew you were a sexual deviant Peter ;)"
Posted by Sin on "Forced Precision" by Dancing_Monkey
- "You have such a beautiful mind, as soon as i'm accepted as a memeber you will be on my favourites list! Such beauty in every line of what you write, I'd like to meet your muse!"
Posted by Unknown on "Parrot, Coin toss, Rematch" by Dancing_Monkey
- "Your poetry, to me, feels like that moment right before you black out. Those last three lines were a murder, made to look like an accident. this was killer."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Forced Precision" by Dancing_Monkey
- " slick ... with an arsenal of sexual condiments ......subsequent to a rigorous deliberation, of course. ...nicely done."
Posted by elisa on "Forced Precision" by Dancing_Monkey
- "Like I've DP-mailed you before, there's a sinister undertone to this piece and as much as clues are given in this piece there's still a wicked mystery to thw whole story opaquely hinted at. Excellent. -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Gatekeepers Bribe" by Dancing_Monkey
- "Its a homage and a truth amongst lies - you get what you asked for - so is it worth paying or not? you might just have to taste it to be sure..."
Posted by Solace on "Gatekeepers Bribe" by Dancing_Monkey
- "We each have our masks, and those memoir's of childlike abandon stay with you forever, nostalgia syndrome and desire become symbolic of another greater desire - the conclusion - oh the conclusion"
Posted by Solace on "Gatekeepers Bribe" by Dancing_Monkey
- "But I wish we'd all be able to sit around and hear Homer sung as it was sung, and Grimm coming to life with nothing but words - lies, but so beautiful as to be better than any truth"
Posted by Solace on "Gatekeepers Bribe" by Dancing_Monkey
- "But they're useful in the compulsion - building beautiful nothings - despite the fact that every boy is a boyscout: really?
Campfires are still an important feature of even modern culture, we just don't tell as interesting tales"
Posted by Solace on "Gatekeepers Bribe" by Dancing_Monkey
- "ha! Feels like you and the captain have been dancing too often together, and its all bribery, every moment is more of it - the actuality of changed positions, of the nature of enslavement - the lies are all that is true"
Posted by Solace on "Gatekeepers Bribe" by Dancing_Monkey
- "your words are like diving into a pool, closing your eyes underwater, and letting your body go limp as you slowly coast out and towards the surface. "
Posted by Unknown on "Fruitless." by Dancing_Monkey
- "to me the first sentence sounds like finding happiness or personal truth in over indulgence...perhaps i'm wrong. i like the wrid all the same. as is every work of yours co written or not...it's a mind bender ;)"
Posted by sIo on "Parrot, Coin toss, Rematch" by Dancing_Monkey
- "from this i get a sense of competetion and maybe sabotage? innocence and perhaps a cold shoulder but remorse at the same time? very hazy but i like it a lot...especially the first sentence..."
Posted by sIo on "Parrot, Coin toss, Rematch" by Dancing_Monkey
- "chimp doggy i'm sowwy but i hafta say i don't get dis at all....i read it like three times though. i tried. but i do like, however, the fact that it is open to question. a straight forward write sometimes can just be cliche"
Posted by sIo on "Gatekeepers Bribe" by Dancing_Monkey
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