Comments by All Members
- "this write, to me , seems so profound in all that it made me feel. it reflects many instances in my own life. it makes me wander of your origans . loved it ~jeeves~"
Posted by lajeeves on "Forced Precision" by Dancing_Monkey
- ""before whipping me the colour of milk" This is one I'll have to read a few times and ponder over... I like the vividness and the the epic feeling within a short space. And the ending is, well, haunting..."
Posted by Unknown on "Forced Precision" by Dancing_Monkey
- "I believe this is about rape...
But it's very hard to connect something so ugly to something written with so beauty in it's expression. well done
FaVe!!"
Posted by Unknown on "a paper filled alley" by Dancing_Monkey
- "oh my! forced precision with bent scalpel! you rouse such intensity within your words. the K.Y jelly helped ease the sharp images into my head...you have a very macabre libido m'dear ;) "
Posted by Unknown on "Forced Precision" by Dancing_Monkey
- "Fucking rocked and not a line out of place. This was Shakespeare for the noughties, a cry to shake off our comforts sought from capitalism and head to a braver newer world. Wonderful :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Come Sweet Unknown." by Dancing_Monkey
- "A house can only truly be haunted, when the life within it impresses upon it that quality - the quality of living - and the horrors that come with just that. The stories they could tell, fathomless. "
Posted by Solace on "Forced Precision" by Dancing_Monkey
- "asking, begging for understanding, - how can we give it to you? and did the pills cause, or give excuse to it, all the milestones become weights with which to drown us, and that band another amongst"
Posted by Solace on "Forced Precision" by Dancing_Monkey
- "Gentleman, are gentlemanly, but they're consummate liars too - every avenue is its own vision, its own little indelible indiction and production - what melody is the melody of the flesh pray tell we ask? You're leaning over the bar"
Posted by Solace on "Forced Precision" by Dancing_Monkey
- "The precision is forced, it doesn't come by effortless weightlessness airy fairy namby pandering - honesty never did, it comes like a raging torrent, and hits like that whip. Quick decisions - night tables and honesty"
Posted by Solace on "Forced Precision" by Dancing_Monkey
- "I beg you, pleading precisely a feeling that needs to be fed - then a melvillesque, they hung him up, freakin' hung him up and he died - i'd like that on my back man. That in/fidelity moment fantastic"
Posted by Solace on "Forced Precision" by Dancing_Monkey
- "i'm still trying to wrap my brain around this and come out with something intelligent to say..... it's stirring and provokes another read to take it all in...but the ending... just collapsed my lungs"
Posted by NikesRain on "Forced Precision" by Dancing_Monkey
- "You do that alot, and now I speak strictly to you as a writer not my friend.... Okey I try to, becouse it is hard to seperate. But as a writer I think you are insanely morbid. More so then many would think."
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "Forced Precision" by Dancing_Monkey
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