Comments by All Members
- "I picture you in bed, hands behind head with this cloud of thought/emotion/action/imagination filling your room, streaming out an open window. And then....all at once the words for this poem come out and the cloud siphons at the speed of the night into the invisible words lingering over your lips. yeah....wow....If I smoked I'd need a cigarette ;) "
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Red antlers" by Dancing_Monkey
- "You won't get this reference likely - reminds me of a Tim Winton short story in his "the turning" collection" it has the same thrust to it - the same effecting stare. "
Posted by Solace on "Red antlers" by Dancing_Monkey
- "im watching the Hannibal tv series at the moment, this poem gives me the same dreamy atmospheric feel as the the show does.
a worthy winner, it was a tough one with a lot of restrictions."
Posted by Tonights Decision on "Red antlers" by Dancing_Monkey
- "Another poetic write... I like your usage of quotes in your work, well placed and nicely accentuates lines coming from another..."..heartfelt release, birthmark fear.." You make a deep impact with few words...great post, much enjoyed
-NN"
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "Red antlers" by Dancing_Monkey
- "This post shows some serious poetic skill, your imagery is impeccable and flourishing throughout...it is strangely calming, relaxing in some way to read it...you have a true talent for portraying your emotions in a way that makes the reader feel it; as this is one of the main and ever-elusive goals of poets, I can't think of a greater compliment to give...Brilliant post
-NN"
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "Fruitless." by Dancing_Monkey
- "This is an incredible story...doesn't even feel right to call it a 'story'; it is heavily poetic and thought-provoking...I am probably repeating previous comments, but I am a little short on words with this one. I read through this a couple times and I see it differently every time; that is something only the deepest poems manage to achieve... It feels like everything is on the surface, readily obvious, but it has great depth...your closing lines couldn't have ended this any better, it added so much to the overall point and impact...again, incredible work here. I will come back to read this post again, thank you
-NN"
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "a paper filled alley" by Dancing_Monkey
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