Amusing my simplicity. (Watered by rhythmical steps. Part one)

By Dancing_Monkey

Please accept my vulgar bidding and common effrontery;
Stop the dance.
Find yourself able to look back and forth,
Jestering a time of your desire.
Beg of me nothing and you will be given;
You might find it noticable that this is an offer only given twice.
The first time you declined,
Secluded and safe in your mothers womb.
In your naptive moment or should I say rhythmical prose?
I give you this offer a second time.

For I am
Life flawed by suspended animation,

For I am
Ego befitting tainted flesh,

For you have
Given me a third chance.

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© 15-03-08 Peter Løgkær
Published on Saturday, March 15, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Sin On Friday, October 13, 2017, Sin (1168)By person wrote:

    I love your way with words. You once sent me a copy of your work "But I would touch" and it is still one of my all time favorite poems. I hope you're making furniture somewhere as beautiful as your words. ~K

  • The Lipstick Factor On Friday, May 30, 2008, The Lipstick Factor (290)By person wrote:

    Wow--read and re-read this. Simply beautiful. Elegant and the last three stanzas are simply amazing.

  • Solace On Monday, April 7, 2008, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    Odd, this is very polite - driven by eloquence. Rhythmical prose well enough. Simplicity easily becomes complexity, the concluding triple is deliciously spoken. Find safety, risk evaluation, let go and sing and soar. Humble piece.

  • A former member wrote: this falls nothing short of excellence.I love each and every line and the way your words demand to be read again and again... the ending is the clincher :)

  • Alanarchy On Monday, March 17, 2008, Alanarchy (1200)By person wrote:

    Fuck yeah.

  • insideout On Monday, March 17, 2008, insideout (47)By person wrote:

    Ah to create, what an awesome gift. This is lovely!

  • carlosjackal On Monday, March 17, 2008, carlosjackal (3010)By person wrote:

    Sweet weavings! Honesty, charm and humbleness. You shall be wooing the ladies no problem at all =)

  • denver nitze On Monday, March 17, 2008, denver nitze (256)By person wrote:

    i've had to read this several times to find a comment appropriate for it. its so beautiful in its brutal upforth truth yet so soft in the conclusion of the anger turning to a sincere gratitude for the chances you'd been given as well. 'a perfect circle' painted perfectly. very well done peter. *bows* much respect brother. peace love and harmonies...~ta~

  • elisa On Sunday, March 16, 2008, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    refined taste... subtle in charm .. yet perfectly conveyed. love it my monkey:)

  • A former member wrote: a perplexing thing; 'back and forth' of ignorance and bliss. . ..of so many of life's contrasts; choices we make or unmake can choose us instead. ... i like the stop/still images. ..ness

  • GraveFlower On Saturday, March 15, 2008, GraveFlower (249)By person wrote:

    ....uhg, chances, i like it .....good write, as usual. how is it possible for a mastermind like you not to write somthing good, without meaning,,,,very very nice

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