Comments by All Members
- "Brilliant work. Your word choice I myself felt a bit intimidated by. Also, I like the idea of using an old logic puzzle as the title for a poem. Cheers, my friend. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "- 4 8 15 16 23 42 -" by Dark Valkyrie
- ""I look for love at all the wrong places Like at the mosh pit at a metal gig"
Haha story of my life. Nice solid work. Well done!"
Posted by Unknown on "- Wrong Places - " by Dark Valkyrie
- "hey I just joined the group. I like you poetry post. my favorite line is "making doves out of dragonflies" that reminds me of my childhood :) keep up the good work I only did one poem, hope to see your other ones soon :)
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Posted by Unknown on "- Almost Home -" by Dark Valkyrie
- "...can't resist a piece involving angels & soldiers, that's a mighty tandem. your poem nailed me w/the battle scene, the carnage & desolation..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "- Valkyrie - " by Dark Valkyrie
- "wow... just wow. Honestly you had me at the first couple of sentences. Honestly, I felt like I was looking into a mirror when I read this... and I fell in love with the words almost immediately. You had so many in depths thoughts and emotions in this, the length didn't bother me at all. I held on the whole way. This was so inspiring, mixed with sadness, drive and hope. and hopelessness. It was truly an amazing read thanks so much for sharing. I felt like I just read things which have been roaming around in my mind for some time, now... :}"
Posted by RubyXero on "Unorganized Thoughts." by Dark Valkyrie
- "This is a really good piece, reflective almost, and a good use of Barker's work for inspiration. I dug how you incorporated the title of one of his most fascinating reads into your work as well. Nice job. "
Posted by Unknown on ":: THE HELLBOUND HEART ::" by Dark Valkyrie
- "I can relate to the insomnia. As far as looking for answers? You said you tried smoking a cigarette... I won't say much there because I'm sure advocating drugs and alcohol won't fly... but...... a dark street corner will make that smoke taste better..."
Posted by DarkAsh on "::De Profundis Clamo ad Te domine::" by Dark Valkyrie
- "if it means anything to you, I read this effortlessly like ...hey i''m not alone...it made sense and it spoke of many things I ponder ... I try and pay attention to every stimulus, in case it points the way or is a type of cryptic clue to guide me towards what I am supposed to be doing at any given point in time...in case I'm missing something or off track...I don't know what I want to 'be' when I grow up ...:P ... keep passing the open windows ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "::De Profundis Clamo ad Te domine::" by Dark Valkyrie
