Comments by All Members
- "Exceptional storytelling. I have always appreciated that skill in poetry, as it's pretty much lacking in mine. Superior to most of the B crap horror films I've been watching lately, & some of those have decently huge budgets. ~shudders~ ...& thank you, Halloween is the only holiday I even come close to celebrating."
Posted by Unknown on "The Man in the Lake." by TheProphetUntold
- ""swam my fingers through his face" is a golden line that ties this tale together so perfectly, the ending is nearly a desolate whisper in comparison to the rest of the piece. Perfect for the season. Cheers. "
Posted by Cyll Kroepe on "The Man in the Lake." by TheProphetUntold
- "This poem is like the approaching Autumn night. I can smell the blood & fire. The s.word moves slowly...it hurts better that way..."
Posted by Unknown on "Blood Season." by TheProphetUntold
- "A slower reading has a stronger effect, noticeable in fact. It really has that autumnal flair to it, with a slight foreboding sense, these are your forte, indeed."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Blood Season." by TheProphetUntold
- "The feeling of woes within this piece are cannot be measure...your inner darkness provides you with your depth wordings...your talent are vast and your writings are indeed excellent...in Garden of grief is worth all the time to read...where everything here are pal[able and haunting...you know how to commands emotions through words, thank you for this piece and the art of imagery well painted in me."
Posted by Unknown on "In Gardens Of Grief." by TheProphetUntold
- "I've always thought the minimal style of senryu/haiku, lends well to your words, like the skeleton of a powerful machine. A hint of cloak and dagger here, and just as quick and efficient, much praise."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Cloth and Knife." by TheProphetUntold
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