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- "i would like to apologize for the spelling errors i was pissed when i wrote this and didn't pay attention to how i spelled it.I fixed so if u would like to re-read."
Posted by draco5445 on "Love is a disease" by draco5445
- "i would like to apologize for the spelling errors i was pissed when i wrote this and didn't pay attention to how i spelled it.I fixed so if u would like to re-read."
Posted by draco5445 on "Love is a disease" by draco5445
- "i would like to apologize for the spelling errors i was pissed when i wrote this and didn't pay attention to how i spelled it.I fixed so if u would like to re-read."
Posted by draco5445 on "Love is a disease" by draco5445
- "interesting, i like how you say that love is a disease for the weak minded. that is so true, it can be a disease for the weak minded and you gain so much if you have a determined will."
Posted by Unknown on "Love is a disease" by draco5445
- "When you correct the spelling errors in at LEAST the title (the entire work, too, if you care about your poetry at all), I will come back to this and read it. Otherwise, you're writing for a dead audience, my friend."
Posted by Amaryllis on "Love is a disease" by draco5445
- "A good tale, told well... an enjoyable read... check a couple of lines... loose the arrow, not lose... "you start pack your things"... forgot something there.... thanks for the write"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Arrow of love" by draco5445
- "Good read, I like.... If you use 'I' at the beginning of a line, use it in the middle...check your 4th line.... thanks for the write "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Unknown Love" by draco5445
- "I can relate, but don't worry, if I could find those kind of people, then you should have no problem, great write, it's raw in it's feeling of loneliness, thanks for sharing."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Lonely Road" by draco5445
- "I liked the flow of this piece. The rhyming made it even better. This was a very nice write. Morbid, but nice. Write on friend. And welcome to DP. If you have any questions feel free to ask. I'll be looking forward to reading more of your stuff."
Posted by Rowan on "Love Me" by draco5445
