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"damn...that's tragic...rainbows melting, dripping, fading to grey... hope is lost and truth goes astray... I have a chicken joke to cheer you up?"
Posted by kinkifrog on "The Sky Fell And Rainbows Died" by Malcholm Dark

"Made me see the sky as a pane of glass, falling, shattering, remnants of its former vibrancy. A dismal glimpse of oblivion, write onward my friend. "
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "The Sky Fell And Rainbows Died" by Malcholm Dark

"Dark piece, my friend. Chicken Little was -killed- crossing the road...heh heh, like that line. Always good to see one of yours...."
Posted by Unknown on "The Sky Fell And Rainbows Died" by Malcholm Dark

"Oh wow. This was really good. I know exactly how you feel."
Posted by Unknown on "The Sky Fell And Rainbows Died" by Malcholm Dark

"Hahahaha! & that 'personal note'....hehehehehehe! Right on, Malcholm. Just never know what to expect from you, man!"
Posted by Unknown on "Butt-ugly Blues" by Malcholm Dark

"The ugly I saw in this piece first, became quite beautiful at the end :) "
Posted by The Coloured Cello on "Butt-ugly Blues" by Malcholm Dark

"this gave me a good chuckle. "
Posted by Unknown on "Butt-ugly Blues" by Malcholm Dark

"Haha Mt. Ugly, the author's note is just priceless as well. All the fellow ugly appreciate the tribute ;)"
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Butt-ugly Blues" by Malcholm Dark

"Another funny enjoyable and thought provoking poem."
Posted by Unknown on "Fantasy At Fourteen" by Malcholm Dark

"yeah... the marionette... these lines... they drum the reader into a mantra of helplessness... the repetition and concise structure therein.... so much like the muppet, the marionette... the ventriloquist's best friend... and when the strings are cut, when that burst of vitality that moves us so lets us fall....... then we know just how much a puppet we are... pensive in its simplicity... effective in its structure and brooding style. *bows* I have vodka for this haha ;) "
Posted by Unknown on "Let Me Fall" by Malcholm Dark

"haha.... love the concept... never pictured Yogi in tights lol. Cindy... I think it was the eyelashes and the lil pink bow ;) ... Yogi sure missed out on that treasured basket haha. Thanks for the whimsical tale, well told, as always :D"
Posted by Unknown on "Robin Hood Of Jellystone" by Malcholm Dark

"Wha ha ha what a picture it painted..robin hood stealing pic nic baskets:P really really funny.thanks for sharing:) "
Posted by Unknown on "Robin Hood Of Jellystone" by Malcholm Dark

"This repetition strings me right along.......like a puppet."
Posted by Unknown on "Let Me Fall" by Malcholm Dark

"I guess Yogi was too busy pursuing gluttony instead of lust haha. It gives a weird image reading this with his voice, my childhood was ruined in the best way, write onward."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Robin Hood Of Jellystone" by Malcholm Dark

"Ahhhahahaha! That's one swingin', snazzy piece, my friend. & truly different!"
Posted by Unknown on "Robin Hood Of Jellystone" by Malcholm Dark

"beats me :D ... haha... thanks Malcholm...'She doesn't approve of my Robin Hood' ... a lighthearted tone with a furry underbelly?... lol"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Robin Hood Of Jellystone" by Malcholm Dark

" BWAHAHAHAHAH! Your author's notes are often times as priceless as your works, my friend. Men in tights, Mr Dark, Men in tights. HAHAHA! --Draven. "
Posted by Unknown on "Robin Hood Of Jellystone" by Malcholm Dark

"My inner puppet cries out for it's own freedom after reading this. With strongest twine, we are bound, broken splinters, on the ground. Nicely written again my friend, thanks for sharing."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Let Me Fall" by Malcholm Dark

"I love the mania and repetition in this...a brilliant write and all too real. "
Posted by Amaryllis on "Let Me Fall" by Malcholm Dark

"This truly amazing and terrific, the rendering of dark and even deceptive events is masterful. Thank you for your commendation "
Posted by Unknown on "2 To Remember Me By" by Malcholm Dark

"humorous social comment....Bieber is obviously hot property in the world of girly teens...does tend to send them 'ape'. Perhaps he could be ina zoo all of his own!! Or in with the lions perhaps..."
Posted by stryder on "Zoo Keeper Needed" by Malcholm Dark

"I can relate to this.i was devastated when my dog died. Pets are indeed important part of our memories..i hope you feel better.thanks for sharing."
Posted by Unknown on "Goodbye Old Friend" by Malcholm Dark

"I burst out laughing when i read justin beiber name:)well he do look like monkey in a hat! Thanks for sharing:)"
Posted by Unknown on "Zoo Keeper Needed" by Malcholm Dark

"i love how "americans" like to believe in columbus day and july 4th and all that. they are really celebrating the eradication of an entire indigenous population. but hey, that's america for you."
Posted by wraith on "People Of The Sun Dance" by Malcholm Dark

"pets can be the best friends in the world. they don't judge and all they require is love and food. after a long day at work it's nice to have an animal to run your fingers in their fur. this hit me hard because i believe that people who hurt animals should have the same done to them."
Posted by wraith on "Goodbye Old Friend" by Malcholm Dark

"Unfortunately, I have a couple animals that belong to that zoo. I can't wait till that boy goes through puberty and his singing voice goes to shite."
Posted by Amaryllis on "Zoo Keeper Needed" by Malcholm Dark

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