"This is one of the best poems i've read it the longest time!!! Great job!! Its so meaningful and so deep. I could see you as a pro!!" Posted by Unknown on "I....{submersion}" by A Velvet Tongue
"ooo i liked this little piece. very nice...i like how you are true to yourself with every line. revealing the good and the bad. awesome vel...wow." Posted by Twilight on "I....{submersion}" by A Velvet Tongue
"i really like the way its written, full of positiveness and hope and so full of life(like you)..great work" Posted by Anth on "I....{submersion}" by A Velvet Tongue
"What if I win? What will you do then? I may not play the game, But I ALWAYS win. lol. Great one. I like the sureness of the poem. ~Mikey" Posted by BleedSilver on "I....{submersion}" by A Velvet Tongue
"well hidelly hodelly this is one fine write. LOVE the lines "sleep sanely while the living wax fantastic" and "freedom to preach". Excellent excellent excellent." Posted by flying_fox on "Fail....(with Capt. Funguy)" by A Velvet Tongue
"so many imaginative lines here, so much imaginative descriptions and metaphors, it just so full of energy and creativity" Posted by Anth on "Fail....(with Capt. Funguy)" by A Velvet Tongue
"Damn. This is breathtaking. Those last two stanzas... No I can't highlight a favorite part without copying the whole thing. Wonderful work, the both of you. This made my day." Posted by Alanarchy on "Fail....(with Capt. Funguy)" by A Velvet Tongue
