Comments by All Members
- "there is craft in these words... something beckons, the soft seduction, the mature reflection, this gives desire a tangible sensuality and turns longing into excitement, into anticipation......... "
Posted by Unknown on "The Witching Hour" by Qurious
- "I enjoyed this because, as you stated below, it's open to interpretation. I read it several times with that in mind. Very hypnotic :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "The Runout" by Qurious
- "thank you! :) it's open to your own interpretation, of course, but to me, it's a pool game :)"
Posted by Qurious on "The Runout" by Qurious
- "a compulsive or cathardic method is revealed here... catching to say the least..... well done......urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "The Runout" by Qurious
- "=) ahaha... I entirely agree. I enjoy finding whimsical poems like this; they just don't come often enough, Not enough Silverstein fans I suppose. Well played. ~b"
Posted by blue on "I'd like to be 5 years old" by Qurious
- "Glad you liked it! No clue who Eddie Brock is, or what a Symbiote is, but Venom is a character in Spiderman 3, no? :D"
Posted by Qurious on "Epidemic" by Qurious
- "Sweet. Hey, I know I am probably way off base here but, are you familiar with Eddie Brock, the person the Symbiote merged with to become Venom? This feels like something that would be going through his head. Loved it.---Draven"
Posted by Unknown on "Epidemic" by Qurious
- "this is a neat approach to acrostic poetry. the stream of consciousness style made it flow nicely without seeming forced in any way. well done!"
Posted by ebonyamore on "My new favourite thing" by Qurious
- "Are you sure you never did this before? I have a feeling like I'm being hustled. :) But seriously, I know what you mean. I envy this particular piece. You have made the Acrostic structure seem so simple to accomplish. I have found with my own style that it is hard for me to follow ANY set structure. I hope your inspiration does not leave you any time in the near future.--Draven"
Posted by Unknown on "My new favourite thing" by Qurious
- "interesting twist on an incredibly sensual piece of music. I really enjoyed this. worthy of the title it bears."
Posted by ebonyamore on "Night music" by Qurious
