Comments by All Members
- "Wow! I love the imagery used, and in a way reminds me of My Life With the Wave by Octavio Paz and in the end revealed where the frustration resulted from. Honestly it was a quite enjoyable read. "
Posted by LittleMissScareAll on "Emptiness...Expanded" by Mirage
- "Reading this, made me think of how people are treated so unfairly, how they lie about love that isn't real, about the pain they bring to others. . I truly love this poem, I will be sure to read your other works, It would be appreciated if you were to read some of mine as well, but that is your own choice, Keep up the good work "
Posted by Unknown on "In Loving Memory..." by Mirage
- ""Clarifying logic as they speak philosophy". Admirable line to a compulsive read. Intelligent. Pure rhythm w/ the right degree of beat & tone. True wit. The Ids & Egos (lefts & rights, etc...) are well weighed as this poem develops its own eloquent Mirage of Self (the Soul Destined?). I felt a little sense of Bill's "The Tempest" in the texture of the 1st 2 lines; nice. [On the other side there is always the Other Side, or alter ego/Id]. Good use of alliteration (espc. Line 4), & the structure, the count was spot on! [How we all so truly steal each others "identities", masks or faces; we soak such Madness as poured into our mouths and spit back the sour sense of Sadness in a vicious cycle: a kind of Systematic Chaos]. You show yourself in this poem & thus it is obviously a personal one (espc. as noted; nice Tribute). Well done!"
Posted by Unknown on "Identity Theft" by Mirage
- "the day will come you just go on and about your buisness and when you least expect it but are feeling good that boy you want will fall on you. "
Posted by sixsixnine on "Disillusioned" by Mirage
