Comments by All Members
- "*shivers* I really like this Haiku. It's perfectly chilling, perfectly emotional and perfectly just a sweet poem. I really like it!"
Posted by Unknown on ""Aphrodisiac" " by HonestMistake
- "cool visuals "Sweat distills down the curved spine" i would never have been able to put into words this effect, and yet, you have done so in very few words .... Bravo! Thanks for the view!!!"
Posted by Opklot on ""Aphrodisiac" " by HonestMistake
- "i like the second half best but the whole thing has impact. poetry doesnt have to be long or have a certain format. give yourself credit for the fact that you have a talent for creating strong feeling and thought with the least amount of words. thats what makes you amazing! even in person, u do this miracle with just your mere presence. i pray you never become self aware. :0) "
Posted by disposable on "Love Through Negativity" by HonestMistake
- ":0) when are you going to realize your genius? just remember us little ppl when u do."
Posted by disposable on "Life" by HonestMistake
- "i like your simplified format. only suggestion i would make is that your poem shows a progression, a transition. so i think it would be awesome if your title reflected that. everything u do is amazing. love you sugarbritches!"
Posted by disposable on "Hate" by HonestMistake
- "i love your use of all things gritty. toxic, parasitic, scattered....your choice of words set a great feel for this one. evrything you do is amazing. just ask wicked ;0)"
Posted by disposable on "Transpire" by HonestMistake
- "feelings weren't meant for me either. but hey, i feel now. and it isn't so bad. you just need the right thing to feel. -mars"
Posted by Mars on "Transpire" by HonestMistake
