Transpire
By HonestMistake
Anger
Hatred
Fustration
These are the emotions I feel
as I sit by my ill-favored self
A broken heart
Shattered from anger
A distorted mind
Shaken by fustration
A liquid soul
Melted by hatred
The peices are lost
In a torrent sea of toxic
I drown as i try to pick up the peices
Sinking further
Into the cold parasitic wastes
Then I awake from my depression
The feeling still weighs me down
I take a deep breath
Pick up the scattered remains
And detoxify myself
These feelings wernt ment for me
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© 2008 HonestMistake
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A former member wrote:
I love it. And you were saying you couldn't write. :P
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On Saturday, September 27, 2008, disposable
(103) wrote:
i love your use of all things gritty. toxic, parasitic, scattered....your choice of words set a great feel for this one. evrything you do is amazing. just ask wicked ;0)
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On Saturday, May 10, 2008, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
a concise sadness is within your prose. well done
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On Saturday, May 10, 2008, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
your pain is well spoken here......well understood.......well done.......urban