Transpire

By HonestMistake

Anger
Hatred
Fustration

These are the emotions I feel
as I sit by my ill-favored self

A broken heart
Shattered from anger

A distorted mind
Shaken by fustration

A liquid soul
Melted by hatred

The peices are lost
In a torrent sea of toxic

I drown as i try to pick up the peices
Sinking further
Into the cold parasitic wastes

Then I awake from my depression
The feeling still weighs me down

I take a deep breath
Pick up the scattered remains
And detoxify myself

These feelings wernt ment for me

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© 2008 HonestMistake
Published on Friday, May 9, 2008.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I love it. And you were saying you couldn't write. :P

  • disposable On Saturday, September 27, 2008, disposable (103)By person wrote:

    i love your use of all things gritty. toxic, parasitic, scattered....your choice of words set a great feel for this one. evrything you do is amazing. just ask wicked ;0)

  • urbanhumility On Saturday, May 10, 2008, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    a concise sadness is within your prose. well done

  • urbanhumility On Saturday, May 10, 2008, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    your pain is well spoken here......well understood.......well done.......urban

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