"Aphrodisiac"

By HonestMistake

The tone of amor
Sweat distills down the curved spine
Stab, exhale, endure

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© 2009 HonestMistake
Published on Friday, May 1, 2009.     Filed under: "Haiku" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: *shivers* I really like this Haiku. It's perfectly chilling, perfectly emotional and perfectly just a sweet poem. I really like it!

  • A former member wrote: sweet love! last line was truly a killer ;)

  • disposable On Tuesday, May 5, 2009, disposable (103)By person wrote:

    haiku kudos to you dear friend. don't be so stingy. please, write on...

  • carlosjackal On Friday, May 1, 2009, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    I concur with Peter :)

  • Dancing_Monkey On Friday, May 1, 2009, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    nice... cought me by suprice

  • carlosjackal On Friday, May 1, 2009, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Heh..Dude, you smoking by any chance ;)

  • Dancing_Monkey On Friday, May 1, 2009, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    ;) nope. not today

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