Hate

By HonestMistake

Hate
Cold, Harsh
Detested, Screaming, Despised
Torture, Erida, Aphrodite, Pleasure
Confused, Touching, Desired
Sweet, Warm
Love

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© 2008 HonestMistake
Published on Wednesday, May 14, 2008.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • disposable On Saturday, September 27, 2008, disposable (103)By person wrote:

    i like your simplified format. only suggestion i would make is that your poem shows a progression, a transition. so i think it would be awesome if your title reflected that. everything u do is amazing. love you sugarbritches!

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