Love Through Negativity

By HonestMistake

It brought us together
The one you despise
It could last forever
A mind full of lies

Blood mixed hearts
Slits her wrists with a knife
My other parts
Needs a change in life

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© 2008 HonestMistake
Published on Wednesday, May 14, 2008.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • disposable On Saturday, September 27, 2008, disposable (103)By person wrote:

    i like the second half best but the whole thing has impact. poetry doesnt have to be long or have a certain format. give yourself credit for the fact that you have a talent for creating strong feeling and thought with the least amount of words. thats what makes you amazing! even in person, u do this miracle with just your mere presence. i pray you never become self aware. :0)

  • A former member wrote: Short but stinging verses.

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