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Love Through Negativity
By HonestMistake
It brought us together
The one you despise
It could last forever
A mind full of lies
Blood mixed hearts
Slits her wrists with a knife
My other parts
Needs a change in life
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© 2008 HonestMistake
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On Saturday, September 27, 2008, disposable
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wrote:
i like the second half best but the whole thing has impact. poetry doesnt have to be long or have a certain format. give yourself credit for the fact that you have a talent for creating strong feeling and thought with the least amount of words. thats what makes you amazing! even in person, u do this miracle with just your mere presence. i pray you never become self aware. :0)
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A former member wrote:
Short but stinging verses.
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