Comments by All Members
- "i use that expression a lot too...describes sooo many people... for a while i thought my dad came up with it. nice to see it used here. :D"
Posted by RubyXero on "Jealousy [the woman]" by colorapathy
- ""attention whore" - What an amazing expression! The poem is overall good but this expression really caught me. Well done =)"
Posted by Any on "Jealousy [the woman]" by colorapathy
- "An awesome flow, and very well done, though this also seems to hint at a loss of innocence with all of the decadence, no? Hmm, either way very nice. *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Dawn of Innocence" by colorapathy
- "the punctuation isn't particularly vital to me to this piece, was written in more of a stream of conciousness style. feel free to change punctiation to whatever you like. lol. Its like the desperation pleasure/pain contradiction that is my life. I really can't explain it better than the piece does. i like listening to people's interpritations of work though. It gives interesting insite into their minds."
Posted by colorapathy on "Moonpain" by colorapathy
- "Being a fan of the "...", I use it a lot, but the overkill in this one almost kept me from reading it through. After a cut and paste, removing some and replacing them with my own punctuation (no foul intended, write as you are led) I found quite an interesting read. This seems almost desperately frenetic, as if buzzed in an effort to fight that sinking feeling?"
Posted by Sketso on "Moonpain" by colorapathy
- "... .i am enjoying your voice; the tones and depths to it as well as the metre. .. .welcome to DP. ~ness"
Posted by Unknown on "Ghost" by colorapathy
- "This WAS a fascinating read, and carlos hit the nail on the head. But the end left me wanting. I'm not sure, it feels like it fell short of really bringing the hammer down. Maybe that's a bit dramatic.... It felt weak, the end, I mean."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Facades (dreaming myself out of existence)" by colorapathy
- "I think, even if I am vain, I still fall short of perfection. This is what good music does to your brainwaves. It rearanges stuffs."
Posted by Alanarchy on "you are [here]" by colorapathy
- "Its supposed to be darkness.. aparently i need to read over these a little better before I submit them. lol"
Posted by colorapathy on "Ghost" by colorapathy
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