Stalling

stillness, sadness
softly stalling
oil drop memories
spreading, calling
distilling sadness
spread like fodder
rain like silence
rippling still water

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Published on Monday, April 7, 2008. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Stalling"

On Monday, April 14, 2008, urbanhumility (1158) wrote:

your economy of words speaks volumes.......well done
A former member wrote: Lucid, effortless flow. Reminded, how it formed, of a raindrop. Interesting. Well done, indeed.
On Monday, April 7, 2008, urbanhumility (1158) wrote:

brilliant sequence of words......well done
On Monday, April 7, 2008, denver nitze (251) wrote:

i love simple poems that that hold tons of meaning to them. you captred that here well. very nice write. welcome to dp. ~ta~