Comments by All Members
- ""And fall into tragic ecstacy", great line. Made the whole poem to me. Great imagry implanted here too. Enjoyed it much:)"
Posted by Ladyhawke on "Angel" by colorapathy
- "A truly brilliant write... A depiction of a person going blind, and at the loss of precious sight gaining something just as valuable in return...?
Was only my perception anyways. Nice write :)"
Posted by Unknown on "exchange of energy" by colorapathy
- "I'd love to scansion this more, but the iambs are unmistakable in places... may have a couple trochees here or there and even a couple spondaic feet in "sad tale" and "again", I think... but I can only imagine the difficulty in writing measured verse... and with notable imagery, too! kudos and congrats!"
Posted by Unknown on "The Scene" by colorapathy
- "I would love to speak it for people some time. I enjoy poetry readings as well as writing it. Thank you for the comment!"
Posted by colorapathy on "The Scene" by colorapathy
- "Congratulations on the win with an excellent, rhythmic piece with such divine imagery. I could quote several, but my favorite by far is "The darkness falls as though by knife." This had such a timeless, classic baroque feeling to it. Well done, indeed."
Posted by Unknown on "The Scene" by colorapathy
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