Comments by All Members
- "the pleasure and pain that is. tend to balance well. like yin and yang or a dragon chasing his own tail. ~ta"
Posted by denver nitze on "Blackest" by skully
- "I agree...I like the beat..."days become daze"...love that line...great write."
Posted by Narcissa on "Found?" by skully
- "the feel to it is intence. i like the idea in the second stanza."
Posted by Nixx on "Shhhh!" by skully
- "Thanks Col. not used the title before but I didn't like another one I did so much (full stops) and it was a sort of result of thunking with that.
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Posted by skully on "Steam of conscious" by skully
- "excellent originality...is this a re-post I think I recognise the title? Anyway...the poem twisted and turned in its labryinthian skin...and the staccato presses of language connected to thought was write out the school of avant-garde; interesting to see, even better to read. I hope you receive some feedback for being something different; it's not always easy, it's even harder to be good with it. Best regards - fine effort, Col.."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Steam of conscious" by skully
- "Sorry DP. More of a rant than a poem. Musn't be getting enough:-("
Posted by skully on "C***" by skully
- "well...interesting. seems you're a bit jaded in this. i liked it though. bringing about many different angles"
Posted by RubyXero on "C***" by skully
- "beautiful. again i look forward for more."
Posted by Nixx on "Miss" by skully
- "f**k i love your style! this speaks to me in my own way. its funny how we seem to run from things, or hope for something that are gone. thats just my interpritation. nice write."
Posted by Nixx on "Rage roar" by skully
- "My god, this poem is visually beautiful. You created amazing shapes with your words, whether it was intentional or not. i love it."
Posted by wilted on "falling" by skully
- "if i were to say anything it would be undermeaning to this"
Posted by Nixx on "Never" by skully
- "when did you write this? Blair is no longer in office...just curious as to you mentioning his name here. Another political poem...well written enough, probably a little mroalistic for me, with a slightly obvious stated ending. Not bad..."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Uprising" by skully
- "I enjoyed this a lot. This would have made a cracking entry into the Politika contest :) -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Uprising" by skully
- "i liked it. it was really powerful, it's not something you can skim over, it's something that has to be read. rock on"
Posted by Mari on "Uprising" by skully
- "I wasn't firing at you, Doe. Would never. :) I really liked the poem. It made me rail against something that irked me anyway. Good emotional stimulus. :)"
Posted by Unknown on "narcotics anonymous" by skully
- "seeing as everything i happen to say basically comes under fire from all sides now it seems... do whatever your heart desires... aside from that... nice write, keep your passion and your voice strong and my the world bless you with all you long for..."
Posted by NikesRain on "narcotics anonymous" by skully
- "the overstated below aside.....this is actually not a bad piece of poetry.....and the passion infused in it makes it very powerful :)"
Posted by Unknown on "narcotics anonymous" by skully
- "The power to accept the things you can't control....what a load of utter bullshit. Find a secular group: you're replacing one addiction for another with a religious group like that. YOU HAVE CONTROL. Don't ever surrender it."
Posted by Unknown on "narcotics anonymous" by skully
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